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热心网友 时间:2024-12-04 03:17
The Big Big wolf is my favorite cartoon star. The wolf has big eyes, sharp tooth (改为复数 teeth) and a wound under his eye (改为复数eyes). He is very clever. Catch (改为非谓语动词作主语,Catching 或 To catch 均可) a lot of sheep is his big dream. To achieve his goal, he invents a larger (用原形 large) number of machines. Unfortunately, he had (改为 has) never caught any sheep. He has been hurt deeply (deeply hurt 换下位置。这个我也没把握。) by sheep, but he never gives off (改为 up, give up意为“放弃”). The wolf loves his family very much. Though his wife and son sometime (改为 sometimes, “有时”) treat him very rude (改为 rudely,用副词作状语), he doesn’t care about it at all. This is the Big Big Wolf, a lovely and funny wolf. I like her (改为 him,前文把大灰狼作为男性对待) a lot.热心网友 时间:2024-12-04 03:17
The Big Big wolf is my favorite cartoon star.The wolf has big eyes,sharp tooth and a wound under his eyes(此处不知道是左眼还是右眼,或者在前面加上left/right).He is very clever.catching(动名词做主语) a lot of sheep is his big dream.To achieve his goal,he invents(invented) a larger number of machines.Unfortunately,he had never caught any sheep.He has been hurt deeply by sheep,but he never gives off(up).The wolf loves his family very much.Though his wife and son sometime(sometimes) treat him very rude,he doesn't care about (去掉about)it at all.This is the Big Big Wolf,a lovely and funny wolf.I like her (him,前文提到他的妻子和孩子)a lot.热心网友 时间:2024-12-04 03:18
tooth改为teeth; catch改为Catching; to achieve改为 To achieve; a larger number of 改为a large number of; had never 改为has never; sheep 改为 the sheep; gives off 改为 gives up; sometime改为 sometimes; rude 改为 rudely; I like her 改为I like him热心网友 时间:2024-12-04 03:18
tooth--teeth
catch--catching larger--large
had--have
off--up family--families sometime--sometimes
rude--rudely 去掉about
her--him
前面的数字是行数
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热心网友 时间:2024-12-04 03:19
The Big Big wolf is my favorite cartoon star.The wolf has big eyes,sharp (teeth) and a wound under his eye.He is very clever.(catching) a lot of sheep is his big dream.to achieve his goal,he (invented) a (large) number of machines.Unfortunately,he (has) never caught any sheep.He has been hurt deeply by (the) sheep,but he never gives (in).The wolf loves his family very much.Though his wife and son (sometimes) treat him very (rudely),he doesn't care about it at all.This is the Big Big Wolf,a lovely and funny wolf.I like (him) a lot.