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发布网友发布时间：2022-05-26 18:13

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热心网友时间：2023-10-15 21:25

but前必须有逗号，increase不加ing，
应该是ed

追问为啥是ed

热心网友时间：2023-10-15 21:26

The bar chart shows some changes about average lifetime of Chinese people in the past 30 years . To be more specific , the average age of Chinese people was 69 in 1980 , then dropped to 68.5 in 1990, but increased to almost 78.4 by 2010 which is really a big improvemnt.
There are several reasons lead to this . For one thing , with the Reform and Opening Policy of China , lots of people have shared the fruits of the economic development over the past 40 years . The residents’ living standard is generally improved ,which attributes to help people keep healthier. In addition , the Reform of Medical System in recent years relives the pressure of people go to the hospital. (Last but not least , national fitness campaign that is meaningful for their healthy and prolong their lifetime are very popular among Chinese residents.）
With all the above, it seems that people's lifetime will be longer than previous generations in the future with the development of science and technology.
尽力了，括号里那一句没看懂是什么意思

热心网友时间：2023-10-15 21:26

My Sunday Today is sunday ,I get up early because I want to play sports .I wear my T-shirt and my shorts.Then I go to the playground to play ping-pong with Peter.We are happy .After that ,we eat breadfast .I like drinking milk but he likes drinking juice .At 10:00,I practise playing the chess with my father .Then I eat lunch at 12:00.I will go to study English in the afternoon.Before I go to bed ,I can watch TV with my parents. This is my Sunday ,I am really very happy .追问什么乱七八糟的，0分

热心网友时间：2023-10-15 21:27

还行吧，语言表达较清晰追问又没有别的句型推荐，句型不够丰富

热心网友时间：2023-10-15 21:27

天书阿，文化不够