·评价一下我写的一篇英语短文,意见中肯马上给分

发布网友 发布时间：2022-05-27 19:24

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热心网友 时间：2023-11-22 20:51

问题不少.总体上一般..
我也只是学生.不知道怎么评分..我想就高3来说.中等稍偏差水平吧,因为出了些不该错的问题.it leaves much to be desired.
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标点就不说了.
"emble" should be "emblem"
in the 3rd line,"culture" here ought to be countable, +s
in the 4th line,"sprite" should be "spirit".
in the 5th line,"ideal" is adj, should be "idea".
and "that it likes" should be "it looks like".意思不同的.
"In addition to" should be "In addition" or "additionally"感觉also也可以去掉,意思重复了吧
"there will be growing indivials" 想表达什么意思?.越来越多人?
那应该是"there will be a growing number of indivials".
"please write to me soon" 改为通常的 "i'm looking forward to hearing from u"

热心网友 时间：2023-11-22 20:51

最后please write to me soon
yours 改为 I'll look forward your letter

热心网友 时间：2023-11-22 20:52

固定词组吧，Olympic games

热心网友 时间：2023-11-22 20:52

感觉不只是语法问题，还有逻辑问题，前后的说法没什么关联额。你的因为所以都没什么太大的逻辑。

热心网友 时间：2023-11-22 20:53

In addition to,to应该去掉