发布网友 发布时间:2022-05-07 21:25
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热心网友 时间:2023-11-14 02:13
One possible version : Dear students, Many people are still hungry in our country. But a lot of food is wasted every day. So we must take action to save food. First, we should eat up all the food when we have meals at home. Second, while dining out, we’d better not order food more than we can eat. If you want to taste different kinds of food, you can order half dish. If the food is still left, you can pack the food and bring it home. In addition, when going shopping, don’t buy too much food at a time, because the food usually goes bad easily. Let’s get started from the small to save food! |
试题分析: 考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题,确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。本文主要应用一般现在时,所以在写作时,要尤其一般现在时态及情态动词的表达方式。联系实际,号召全国人们“文明用餐,节俭惜福”。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒:考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些固定句式号召人们应该行动起来,为文章增色不少。如: We should eat up all the food when we have meals at home. Let’s get started from the small to save food! 学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语, 写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。考点: 提纲作文。 |