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Facing the fierce competition, some students are possibly easy to get psychological problems. They often feel low or depressed, worried, nervous and discouraged when they met with difficulties and trouble. Some feel great pressure of study, being afraid of their teachers’ questions and worried about examinations. Meanwhile, others feel lonely and are unwilling to communicate with their classmates or friends. Personally, I think a good solution to those problems is to set up a goal of study and take an active part in varieties of activities held by the class or the school.
试题分析：考察提纲类短文阅读。本文讨论的话题是学生心理问题，属于议论文范围，所以使用一般现在时，和第三人称。文章的要点都给了出来。
要点：1.心理问题的具体表现：1. 抑郁焦虑，感到紧张害怕，遇到困难就灰心。2. 学习压力大，怕老师提问，怕考试。3. 孤独的封闭心理，不愿和同学朋友交流。2.心理问题的解决方法：1. 积极参加班级和学校组织的各项活动。2. 树立学习目标。
这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。
【亮点说明】本文的亮点在于高级句式的运用，如分词做状语的用法：Facing the fierce competition, some students are possibly easy to get psychological problems.和Some feel great pressure of study, being afraid of their teachers’ questions and worried about examinations.这部分内容恰好是高二所学，这里运用得很合适。
