我写的会考英语作文,哪位大神帮忙检查一下语法错误,顺道评一下多少分...
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My best friend susan is a fifteen-year-old American girl.she is my neighbor. Her family is very friendly.susan is a very beautiful girl.she has long gold hair. She wears glasses and likes to wear a blue and white dress. She has many friends because she is out-going. i met her at the first time when she lost her key to get to her home. I invited her to my house and we talked for a long time.susan is so welcoming that she always help me learn English. I hope that we could have a colorful future.
这是我修改的，不能保证完全正确。评分的话我本身也不是特别了解
