帮忙修改一篇自我介绍 50分追加

发布网友发布时间：2024-10-23 03:21

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热心网友时间：2024-11-06 22:33

Good morning,everyone!
When you see someone ,you may say hi to him. And ,please remember that you say hi what means my name--Hiric.
I'm from Zibo and I'm fourteen years old. My birthday is on August,24th. so you can give me a gift on that day.
I love English so much, I am good at working on computers, and I have my own site on the Internet, I like listening to New Age music .My favoriite musician is Yanni, I can get a special power from his songs.for example ,his songs can make me write homework quickly. And I like listening to other new age musicans’ songs with my iPod ,too, like Jarre, Secret Garden, And I am a linux fan .i have debian and ubuntu every week .surely,I want to make a easy and human linux .i think my dream will come true
Thank you, that's all.

帮你改成演讲的了,要是不是用来演讲的,稍微在格式上修改下就好了~~

热心网友时间：2024-11-06 22:33

very good !
only one:"I love Englishi so much" then?

热心网友时间：2024-11-06 22:31

Good morning/evening all !
When you meet someone ,you may say hi to your new friends. And ,please remember you say hi means is my name . Hiric.
I'm from Zibo I'm fourteen years old. My birthday is on August,24th, so you have no need to give me a gift.
I love English so much, I am good at working with computers, and I have my own site on the Internet, I like reading and listening to New Age music .My favoriite musician is Yanni, I can have a special power from his music ,for example his music can make me write homework quickly. And I like listening to other new age musicans’ works with my iPod too, like Jarre, Secret Garden, And I am a linux fan .i have debian and ubuntu every week .sure,I want to make a easy and human linux .i think my dream will come true
Thanks.ok!!!!!!!!!