...就媒体中频频出现的“富二代”发电子邮件向你询问。请你给他回封邮...

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热心网友时间：2024-10-27 11:31

Dear John,
I’m very pleased to receive your email. You asked me the meaning of rich second generation in chinese language. The following is what I think about it.
In recent years many new terms have come into use, one of which is rich second generation. It means those who were born in the 1980s and inherited millions of prosperty of their parents. At the same time, they received good education and now live a happy life. Generally speaking, some of them are indeed successful in their careers. Some are playboys and most of them are ordinary in everything.
In my opinion, people can be happy, just depending on themselves. Those who rely on others cannot get real happiness. On the contray, they will lose everthing.
I wonder if my answers suit you. please write back soon.
Yours
Wan Lin

试题分析：考查应用文中的书信的写作。同时也属于提纲类作文，要点都已经给出，向你的笔友John 就媒体中频频出现的“富二代”进行解释，包括1. “富二代”指生于二十世纪八十年代的年轻人； 2. 继承了父辈资产，接受过良好教育； 3. 目前人们对“富二代”的看法。审题时注意本文使用的时态，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用省略句，倒装句和强调句型准确表述。如范文里面的In recent years many new terms have come into use, one of which is rich second generation. It means those who were born in the 1980s and inherited millions of prosperty of their parents.还有要用适当的关联词把文章串联起来：At the same time, Generally speaking等等。
点评：提纲类短文的关键在于要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，词汇句型的选用，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。