英语描写,改正一下,thx

发布网友发布时间：2024-08-20 02:54

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热心网友时间：2024-08-25 21:50

it eats dog's food。去掉，狗当然吃狗食。it can learn some special moving for funny。moving改成action,动作。funny 改成 fun
it is playful,it can play with us when we bored.把“，”改成and,we bored改成we feel bored.it has a very ningenious nose,it can smell many scents.ningenious改成ingenious“，”改成and ,
many scents改成many kinds of sents,

热心网友时间：2024-08-25 21:56

it is a mammal and it eats dog's food.it is very cute but little.it not only honest to its master,but can do some special moving for funny. it is a good friend for us.
when we are boring,it can play with us .it has a very ningenious nose for it can smell many scents.it has soft fur and it has short tail and a little body and a little head with four legs.

热心网友时间：2024-08-25 21:56

...应该没有

热心网友时间：2024-08-25 21:50

如果不是写诗的话，我认为重复语it太多了,使得整个文章很乏味。
比如最后一句应该就是it has a little head ,a little body and a littl tail with four legs.
另外气味是可数的吗？应该改成it can smell many kinds of scent.