...I was about to leave……Mother's advice!这篇短文
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发布时间：2024-08-19 19:45
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时间：2024-08-22 09:52
原文：
This morning I was about to leave for school then suddenly I heard my name called. She
was Mother. “ John, puts on more clothes, and you’ll catch cold. It is so cold outside.” “ I don’t
think it is cold today,” I said impatiently, ran away before she could say a word. Seated in front of the classroom, I was listening to my teacher careful. However, it was not yet nine o’clock when it was started to snow. I began to shake with cold. After all, a thin jacket is poor protection of the cold weather. I caught a bad cold. If only I had followed Mother’s advices!
答案：
…leave for school then suddenly… then改成when
She was Mother She 改成It
…puts on more clothes… puts 改成put
…and you’ll catch cold… and 改成or
…ran away before she… ran改成running或者前加and
Seated in front of… front 前加the
…to my teacher careful. careful 改成carefully
…when it was started to… 去掉was
…protection of the cold weather of改成against或from
…followed Mother’s advices ! advices改成advice
翻译：今早，当我突然听到有人叫我的时候，我正打算去上学。原来是我妈妈叫我：“约翰，穿多点衣服，不然你会感冒的。外面太冷了。我不耐烦的回答说：“我觉得今天不冷啊”。然后在她能说话之前就跑掉了。坐在教室的前排，我很认真的听课。但是，还没到九点的时候，天就开始下雪了。我开始冷颤。毕竟，一件薄夹克是抵挡不住寒意的。就这样我得了重感冒。要是我听了妈妈的话就好了！
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时间：2024-08-22 09:49
was Mother. “ John, put on more clothes, or you’ll catch cold. It is so cold outside.” “ I don’t
think it is cold today,” I said impatiently, running away before she could say a word. Seated in the front of the classroom, I was listening to my teacher carefully. However, it was not yet nine o’clock when it started to snow. I began to shake with cold. After all, a thin jacket is poor protection from the cold weather. I caught a bad cold. If only I had followed Mother’s advice!
今天早上当我正要出门去上学时，我听到有人叫我的名字，是妈妈”约翰，穿多一点，否则你会感冒的，外面很冷“。”我觉得今天不冷啊“我不耐烦地说道，在妈妈唠叨前就跑了出去。坐在教室前排，我认真听老师讲课。然而，9点不到外面就下雪了。我开始冷的发抖。毕竟，一件薄薄的夹克衫是不足以抵御寒冷的天气的。我得了重感冒。要是我听妈妈的话就好了！
