...would be no virtue”(没有感恩就没有真正的美德。)如今社会上一些...

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热心网友时间：2024-10-10 03:16

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Not only do our parents give us life, but they also give us endless love and support, always sharing our happiness and sorrow.
I’m very grateful to my parents. They give me so much love and spare no efforts to support me. I still remember once I was seriously ill, they were so worried and almost accompanied me the whole night. Now I’m in Senior 3.Luckily for me, my parents can understand my stressful condition and often communicate with me with encouraging words. Furthermore, they give me enough personal space, which I appreciate so much.
What I should do now is to study hard. When I grow up, I will try my best to make my parents live a happy life.

试题分析:本文考察提纲作为。首先，学生要仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。另外要注意提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。最后，要根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。本文主要写要学会感恩，主要是对父母感恩，为什么要感谢父母？怎样感谢？这都要要在文章中表现出来。
亮点说明：全文结构严谨，段落分明。用了一些很好的短语，如：be grateful to , spare no efforts to do另外还用了一些从句，如：I still remember once I was seriously ill, they were so worried and almost accompanied me the whole night.给文章添色不少。