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发布时间：2022-05-10 01:11
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热心网友
时间：2023-07-25 23:32
1.....had shown that the amounts of the traditional classic readers has got decreased.....
这句话中首先有个问题是容易引起误解,the traditional classic readers,是传统的经典读者呢，还是读传统名著的读者;所以改成the traditional classics' readers
另外,....的数量,修饰人的话,更常用的是the number of
整句修改如下:
....had shown that the number of the traditional classics' readers has been decreasing....
2.seriously不是seriousely,尽量减少这样的失误.
3.because reading classic is very important (for us to widespread our traditional culture,and especially) in our growing progress.
首先要保证前后一致,所以reading classic应该和前文一致,是reading classics
widespread是形容词,要用有把握的词,enlarge,extend,increase都可以用.
整句修改如下:
because reading classics is quite important for us to extend our knowledge of traditional culture,and.....
4.for example recent years there has risen a lot of "new showers" which called "after 80s"their views on something shows very diffrent from which in the past
for example后面别忘了加逗号
rise做增加,增长讲,是不及物动词,不能直接跟宾语，换个词increase
"after 80s"后面需要加逗号
their views....shows.. 语法错误
整句修改如下:
for example, recent years there have been increasing great amounts of "new showers" who called "after 80s", their views on many things show dramatically different.
5.many young people agree with him on some degree,they think that every period has its character.
语法错误
many young people agree with them in some degree,they think that every age has its own character.
6.the new time of internet has come now,take along with this,many people has the chance to display their opinion,they think that may be more suitible to this society
这句话问题有点多
新时代多用new age
take along with this做插入成分也该注意时态问题,应该为taking along with this
many people has....,这样的错误一说你就知道，粗心要不得.
they think that may be....从句是不是少主语?
they think that the views may be.....
整句修改如下:
the new age of internet has come now,taking along with this,many people have chances to display their opinions,they think that the views may be more suitible to this society.
7.because they think that was the true way,they are convinced by the long time....
被动用的有问题
because they think that was just the true way, which they were conviced in a long time....
8.they always think that one will easily be successed on the condition of accepting the classics knowlege.
被动表达意思,错了.
they always think that one will easily succeed in the condition of accepting the knowledge of classics.
9....the combine of the classic and fashion will be accept by most people.
combine的用法有错误
应该为:
combining traditional literature and fashionable literature will be accepted by most people.
热心网友
时间：2023-07-25 23:33
有很多的原因形成了这样的现象，例如近些年新增了很多称之为“80后”的“新一代”，他们在看待一些事物上与前人很不相同。许多年轻人在某些程度上同意“80后”的观点，他们认为每个时期有每个时期的特点。英特网的新时代已经来临了，随之而来的，很多人有机会展示他们的观点，他们认为他们的观点更适应于这个社会；与此同时，仍有许多人热爱着传统的文化，因为他们长久以来都认为传统的文化才是正确的，他们总是认为一个接受经典知识的人才更有可能成功。
如今在这个问题上仍然有很多的争辩，无论是赞同哪一边的，我相信更多的人将会接受经典和时尚想结合的东西。
