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发布时间:2024-10-04 12:21
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热心网友
时间:2024-10-11 23:24
很多语法错误啊 第二句,give me your lover?
lover是情人 爱人的意思。
整篇文章看起来汉语式英语了有点……
热心网友
时间:2024-10-11 23:29
Can you missing me that one boy was loveing you!
can you miss me.
光看了第一段就很想死,完全不通顺,不知道再讲什么。除了最后一句以外(出自歌词)
热心网友
时间:2024-10-11 23:25
二:love
三:very hard
四:can miss
When we get old, Will you miss a boy who loved you!
Baby won't you tell me why there is sadness in your eyes.I don't wanna say goodby to you. love is one big illusion that l should try to forget. But there is something left in my head. You're the one who set it up.However,now you're the one who wana make it stop. I'm the one who's feeling lost right now. Now you want me to forget. every little thing you said. but there is something left in my mind. I won't forget the way in which you kissed me. the feeling's so strong that it will last for so long! l'm not the man ur heart is attaching to! That's why you go away,l know.You were never satisfied. no matter how l tried to please you,to touch ur heart. now you wanna say goodbye to me. Iove is one big illusion that I should try to forget! but there is something left in my mind! I won't forget the way in which you kissed me! the feeling's so strong that it will last for so long! but l'm not the man ur heart is attaching to! that's why you go away,l know!!!!
Yes l know ! Left sitting here all alone. in the middle of nowhere. don't know which way to go. there ain't so much 2 say now between us. there ain't so much for you. there ain't so much for me anymore. I won't forget the way in which you kissed me! the feeling's so strong that it will last for so long! but l'm not the man ur heart is attaching to! that's why you go away,l know!!!!
真不如我写了,come on,哥们,加油!!!!!!!!
热心网友
时间:2024-10-11 23:24
本来看了题目想进来改的。结果看了1小段,起了一身鸡皮。对不起楼主了,我说PASS了。