给你的朋友写一封信,告诉他自己上星期做了什么,内容尽可能详细,要注意...

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热心网友时间：2022-06-14 07:09

On the morning of an autumn weekend, the door of the learning kingdom was opened. The first stop is English castle.

Why do you have an English class? Because my grades were too bad, my mother was afraid that my English grades were getting worse and worse, so she let me take an extracurricular counseling class.

After English class, my mother hurried with me to the second stop dance castle. Dance is my favorite interest class.

After dance class, at lunch time, my mother and I had a simple lunch and rushed to my third stop piano castle.

Playing the piano makes my fingers more flexible. My fingertips dance on the keys like dancers performing for everyone.

After piano class, I can finally rest! This is my weekend day, isn't it very full?

译文：在一个秋天的周末的早晨，开起了学习王国的大门。第一站英语城堡，为什么要上英语课呢？因为我的成绩太不好，妈妈怕我的英语成绩越来越差，所以让我上了个课外辅导课。

下了英语课妈妈带着我急急忙忙奔向第二站舞蹈城堡，舞蹈可是我最喜欢的一门兴趣班了，上完舞蹈课，到了午饭时间，我和妈妈简单的吃了个午饭，又马不停蹄赶向我的第三站钢琴城堡。

弹钢琴让我的手指更灵活，指尖在琴键上飞舞，像舞蹈演员在给大家表演，下了钢琴课我终于可以休息了！这就是我周末的一天，是不是很充实啊？

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热心网友时间：2022-06-14 08:27

Dear Tom,
I have received your letter asking what I did last week.And now I am writing back to tell you about it.
As usual,on Monday to Friday,I went to work from 8 a.m.to 18 p.m.,with two huors for lunches and rest .During the week days,I finished my task and was praised by my leaders.
After work every day,I went out to take exercise in the park nearby.
On Saterday,I companied my child and took him out to the zoo.And then in the afternoon,together with my wife,we did some shopping.
I feel I spent a good and pleasant week.
How about your life last week?
With best wishes.
Yours truly,
Jack.