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Health or Wealth?
The passage mainly tells us about the relationship between people’s health and wealth and discusses which is more important and how to deal with them correctly. (27 w)
Nowadays, quite a lot of people think money is everything, so they work day and night, trying to gain, at the cost of their health, as much money as possible.
But what is the use of wealth without health?
In my opinion, we should pay more attention to our health because it’s the base of our lives. So important is it that we should not ignore it at all. If we’re in poor health, how can we work hard for wealth and enjoy wealth?
To be healthy, we mean to be both physically and mentally healthy, the latter of which, I believe, is more valuable. In short, life will never come back once we lose it. Therefore, we should try to protect and respect it with our action: try to be healthy. (132 w)
1、把握内容要点短文概括要精当，讨论内容要重点突出，详略得当；内容包括：
①在当今社会中，人们对待“健康与财富”的态度和做法；②你对生命、健康（心理健康与身体健康）及财富之间相互关系的认识。
2、主题写作基本达到：①归纳完整，表述清晰。②观点鲜明，说服力强。