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热心网友 时间:2023-10-06 08:19
Dear Mr. Li, I’m glad to tell you that I have made great progress in my English study since I became a senior high school student. When I started senior English in the beginning, I found it much more difficult than what we learned in junior school and I almost lost heart. Later, I realized the importance of English, so I got up early every morning, recited English words, listened to English tapes and did a lot of exercises. I also asked my teachers and classmates for better ways of learning English. Now, I’m improving my English greatly. And I’m getting more and more interested in learning it. Thank you so much for your great help in your class. Wish you all the best. Yours, Li Hua |
试题分析:题目是学生熟悉的书信作文,要求给老师写一篇书信,信的要点已经给出,作文必须包括所有要点,但不能逐条翻译,要注意语句的连贯、通顺。注意书信格式要正确,时态和人称的使用要得当。作文主要讲述的是过去的事情,最好使用一般过去时。 【亮点说明】范文使用Later, so, and, also, Now等连接前后句和上下文,做到了衔接紧密。范文使用了较多的短语:make great progress in, in the beginning, find it+形容词作宾补, listened to, ways of doing, get interested in等,使范文内容变得充实。 范文也用到了一些重要的句型:have done sth since+从句, 宾语从句what we learned in junior school, more and more, thank sb for sth等。 |