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发布网友发布时间：2023-07-14 22:11

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热心网友时间：2024-11-26 16:21

Due to my consistently high performance in my academic coursework, I was awarded scholarships several times in university. I have attained the CET, Grade 6 and also achieved Grade 3 in the National Computer Examination. I joined the Communist Party of China my freshman year, [a privilege reserved for only the top X% of students].#

I actively seek enrichment opportunities outside the classroom. I have volunteered as webmaster for a school site for almost two years. In my first year of university I was selected to be class monitor. I have also received various awards for my performance in a { }* Business Plan Competition.

#我姑且认为这是个荣誉，如果是的话就加上我[ ]里面的话。
*这个比赛是多大范围的？比如全国性(national)，全省等等，如果范围大的话可以加进去。你这个自我介绍要显示自己优秀之处，所以我给你的措词改变了一下，比如从’我很用功，得到了奖学金‘到’由于我持续达到优秀成绩，我多次获得奖学金‘

热心网友时间：2024-11-26 16:22

感觉还不错等待高手出现呵呵