初学英语,每周一篇书面表达.请求改错!5

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热心网友时间：2024-11-23 20:20

谬误不少....
Everyone has his own hobbies. Some like collecting old cars and some like collecting models. I am fond of playing electronic guitar. And it is very different from an acoustic one. Amplifier and pedals play important roles in round effects. So we don't play tricks with them but just get lots of practice with all the equipments in order to make it play better. After all, one has to be playing with a guitar not just play it.
提示：注意时态、人称形式，这些因素是老外在口语当中也很重视的
时间关系，我没办法帮你解释太详尽
额外建议：在你的基础还没太扎实之前，不要轻易尝试自己写太难的文章，不然会使得你的中国式英文表达更熟练
另附
哥们，学外语，最重要的是有兴趣，老对着书本你肯定犯困，看双语字幕电影学最实在了
给你几个理由
第一，老外编剧写的台词，每个字都精确斟酌，保证语法语意通畅，要想学好外语，首先得保证学习资料的质量，总是拿半桶水的国人同胞自己写的那些蹩脚英文，你将永远只会说中国味的外语
第二，老外专业配音演员的口音，保证纯正地道，切音调，语速，语气变化丰富，适合模仿，便于训练听力，想想看，老外的吵架你都能轻松听懂，还在乎国人配音的慢速磁带么
第三，老老实实一句句抄写台词，即可以加强记忆，也能锻炼英文书法，还可以训练速记
第四，摘抄下来的台词，勤勤恳恳的每天抽时间背记，可以尝试结合影片情节记忆，效果相当好，要知道，你在记的正是老外每天在说的话，就好像我们生活在真实的国外环境当中一样
第五，常找人操练英文，百度HI或MSN都有，即便只有文字交流的机会，也要珍惜，顶多边打字边动嘴巴
第六，有问题多上网查询，那里有很多答案，总有一个你会满意
做到以上的，你完全可以不用听老师讲课也能考优秀了
我是个干苦力活的，没念过书，为了改变自己悲惨的现状，我也在刻苦练英文，用的就是这个方法,别瞎浪费钱买这买那，但最好带个MP5
考试过关最好的办法，把每个词，每个句子，每篇文章都能看懂....

热心网友时间：2024-11-23 20:20

Just a little bite funny, how about I make some change for you and you should take look;

Evebody has hobbys. Someone like collect old cars and some other like collect models......I am an electric guitar player. Electric guitar is much different than to acoustic guitar. Amplifier and effect pedals for sound is very importent. So many guitar fans not train tricks. Only buy lots of equipment. To want to let their sound become smooth. As a matter of fact, these guys were plaied by equipment instead of that they plaied equipments.
So we should become weselfs master.

热心网友时间：2024-11-23 20:21

Evebody have hobbys. 是everybody,而且应该用has,因为是单数
Somebody like collect old cars. 应在like后加to,或将collect改成collecting
I am a electric guitar player. 将a改成an
Electric guitar is very different than to acoustic guitar. 去掉to,be different than后直接接名词
Amplifier and effect pedals for sound is very importent. 将for改成of
So many guitar fans not train tricks. fans后加do
Want to let hims sound become sweet. hims改成his,he的所有格为his,宾格为him
So we should become weselfs master. 这句话很中文,而且"我们自己"应为ourselves 此句应该为So we should become the masters of our own

热心网友时间：2024-11-23 20:21

Everbody has hobbies.单复数形式Somebody likes collecting old cars.Somebody likes collecting models......like+doing 喜爱干某事I am a electric guitar player.Electric guitar is very different from acoustic guitar.固定搭配 be different from 。Amplifier and effect pedals for sound are very importent.单复数 But many guitar fans donot train tricks.转折的语气，不是因果 they just buy lot of equipment. equipment 不可数名词 They want to let their sound become sweet. As a matter of fact, this guy is playing by equipment, Not playing equipment.结构对等
We should become our own masters. 没因果关系

热心网友时间：2024-11-23 20:22

Everybody has their hobbys. Some likes collecting old cars.The others prefer collecting models. I am a electric guitar player.The electric guitar is different from the acoustic guitar greatly. Amplifier and effect pedals of sound in electric guitar is very important. So many fans donot train tricks and only buy lots of equipment.They want to make it sound sweet. As a matter of fact, this kind of guitar is played by equipment, not playing equipment.
So we should master it by ourselves.

热心网友时间：2024-11-23 20:23

everybody have hobbys. somebody like collecting old cars.somebody like collecting models....i an a electric guitar player. electric guitar is very different from acoustic guitar.