现代汉语翻译成英语,高手能帮个忙吗?

发布网友发布时间：2022-04-24 13:43

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热心网友时间：2023-10-11 03:04

呵呵，原来楼主似乎在申请学校。我来献一回丑吧。我的经验是句子之间要有逻辑，才显得严谨，道理令人信服。若光逐字翻译会比较生硬

另,楼上机译的实在是不敢恭维啊,不是很多错误,而是压根就没通的句子.

Dear Sir / Madam,

I really appreciate your time and attention to my email / application / case. ……..

Once I have been told by my tutor that the current popular art forms are actually originated from the artistic innovation and accumulation since the Age of Enlightenment and Renaissance in Europe. Therefore, learning the western art concepts and media materials, for me, means not only broadening my outlook and opening my mind, but also exploring the artistic ideas and thoughts outside Chinese traditional cultures. As we know a knight can always recognize the best sword because he practices constantly; a musician can create graceful symphony as she performs everyday. Thus I believe that if I could have a chance to practice and master the essence of both eastern and western culture, I will have the ability to promote and integrate traditional art forms into a further level.

As I know XXX University is a famous university in the world and well known for its art and media subjects. It would like to apply the Creative Media course in you university as it matches my interest, qualifications and experience. I wish the XXX University would be the place where my dream is taking off.

Sincerely yours

1．楼主的中文水平实在是不错。翻译起来很费劲，达不到那种高度
2．中间的古诗，我就只能依葫芦了画了
3．“我想任何一所如贵校这样具有国际化视野与影响力的注重观念碰撞与融合的走在世界前端的创意媒体学院都不会拒绝一位具有此理想和信念的虔诚的中国学生的申请。” 我想鬼老是不吃这套的，他们也理解不了这层逻辑。
望指正

对楼主"补充"的补充:
如果你的这封信只是催下他们看你材料的话, 那我会毫不客气的说, 你这种思维方式鬼老是完全不能理解的.他都不知道你这封信是要做什么.What's your point? 英语的习惯是开门见山,直入主题,尤其是应用类文体。你想想,那些坐办公室吹空调拿工资的学校员工会跟你讨论"观千剑而后识器，操千曲而后晓声"的问题吗? 就应该直入主题: 收到我材料了吗? 快回复呀! 我等着呢!

给申请办公室这样:

Dear XXX,

RE: Application of MBS, case No. 1234567

My name is Tony Blair and I am writing regarding the process of my application for Master of Business Systems in your department. All the materials of application were sent through to you on 11 Dec 2008 as per the request. As I haven't received any official confirmation, would you please be able to check the status of my application and confirm that when I would receive the result?

Your early reply would be appreciated. Thank you very much.

Regards

TB

给教授本人这样:

Dear Professor Habbinson,

How are you?

My name is Tony Blair and I am currently in the process of applying the MBS in your department. I already sent in all the application forms and materials in the end of Nov 2008. As I have not received any confirmation from you yet, I am wondering if there is any document omitted. If you do need any more material or certificate, please do not hesitate to contact me on email or phone. My contact details are:
Email: tony@yahoo.com.cn
Phone: +8613899887788.

I am particularly interested in the subject offered in your department because it matches my learning and experience so much and I am eager to learn and do research in this field. Therefore I am looking forward to continuing my postgraate studies at Yale University. I would be grateful if you could advise me the possible time that I could get the result.

Thank you for your time.

Sincerely yours,
Tony B

这几天比较闲,你有什么赶快问啊.分分不重要, 就是图个乐.

刚又想到一点很重要的是: 如果你真是要去国外学习和生活, 一定要开始培养用英语思维 thinking in English.无论是说话和写作, 要用英语来组织语言,不要写了中文再翻译. 切记

热心网友时间：2023-10-11 03:04

翻译如下：
We ask about a possible incentive because almost all visitors to your site wind up
signing up for both leads you have banners up for. If you are using Google somehow,
what would I enter or search for on Google to bring up XXXX.com?
我们要求的可能，因为几乎所有的奖励您的网站访问者清盘

双方签署了导致您有横幅了。如果您使用的是谷歌不知何故，

什么我会输入或搜索的谷歌带来了XXXX.com ？

热心网友时间：2023-10-11 03:05

Thank you to look into my mail in 100 favours,.........., My Chinese tutor once told me, the latest pop art derived from west to enlighten sport and literature renew the thought innovation of the time and art to accumulate Dian and go to the west studies a media of the method of the way and art, can the biggest spacious range of experience open mental horizon, the most important is can study Chinese traditional culture outside of art viewpoint and thought, thus feed parents Chinese literature.the Chinese old saving have cloud: view thousand swords and then know a machine, hold thousand songs and then Xiao voice, I want only learn a west art in Guan of essence then can spread to accept to develop an art of magic power combine at this foundation up expand innovation, I think any 1,such as expensive school, to have internationalization visual field and influence so of pay attention to idea collision and blend of walk in the world of the creativity medium of the head college can't refuse a has this ideal and conviction of devout of the application of the Chinese student.so, I very very hope to get into expensive creativity medium in the school profession to carry on advanced study. this be one of my dream, is also a my diligent direction for long time.

热心网友时间：2023-10-11 03:05

热心网友时间：2023-10-11 03:06

Thank you for your busy schele to read my mail ,.........., my Chinese tutor told me that today's popular art from the Western Enlightenment and the Renaissance when the idea of innovation and artistic heritage, Western media to learn of the Road and art law, can greatly broaden their horizons to see growth in the most important thing is to learn traditional Chinese culture to the outside of the art of insight and ideas, thereby feeding the Chinese literature and art. China is an old saying: View of thousands of knowledge and then the sword, and Cao Xiao-1000 and then the sound, I think only the study of the essence of both Chinese and Western art will be able to carry forward the tradition of the charm of art on the basis of innovation, I would like to any one if your school such an international field of vision and influence of the emphasis on the concept of the collision and integration in the world, the front of the School of Creative Media will not refuse a man of ideals and beliefs in this devout Chinese students to apply. Therefore, I am very very much hope to get into the school of creative media professionals to carry out further studies. This is my dream, but also my long-standing efforts.

热心网友时间：2023-10-11 03:07

In spite of being very busy thanks you to examine my mail, .........., of my Chinese teacher has told me, nowadays the pop art comes from time the West Enlightenment and the Renaissance thought innovation and art accumulates, goes to law of road and the artistic the Western study media, may broaden one's outlook enormously the growth experience, most importantly can study outside China traditional culture the artistic insight and the thought that thus returns nurturing to parents the Chinese literary arts. The Chinese archaism has the cloud: The view thousand swords then know, holds thousand tunes then to understand the sound, I think only then the knowledgeable of East and West artistic essence only then to be able to inherit carry forward the artistic charm and based on this develop the innovation, I thought that any like your school will have the internationalization field of vision and the influence like this pays great attention the idea collision and fusion walking will not refuse one front end the world creativity media institute to have this ideal and the faith reverent Chinese student's application. Therefore, I very hoped that can enter your school creativity media specialized to carry on pursues advanced studies. This is my dream, is also I since long the direction diligently.