请帮忙检查一下语法错误,不知道句式是不是正式的,可以的话能给些建 ...

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热心网友 时间：2024-08-08 20:37

Our company has had our own resume format, which can be checked easily and also can make people comfortable
has had为什麼要用完成时呢?你们公司不是一直都有的吗?应该用一般现在时呀;easily最好还是放在checked前面,当然你放后面也没错;can make people comfortable这里是不是有点问题呢?请问你本意也是让resume format作这句话的主语吗?一个resume format又怎麼make people comfortable??后面这句话真正的主语是什麼???
改our company has our own resume format, which can be easily checked ......

Please check it in the accessory, and send it to the candidate in the furture.
check it in the accessory要改一下,check it with the accessory,没有说check it in...的

Please feel free to contact me if you have any question.请问你想表达什麼意思呢?什麼叫feel free?
我知道你的意思,其实不用说那麼多的,你直接说please contact me if you have any question就行了,这样就已经把你要表达的所有意思都说出来了,外国人都是这麼说的

不好意思,话比较多,见谅^_^

热心网友 时间：2024-08-08 20:30

Our company has had our own resume format, which can be checked easily and also can make people comfortable has had为什麼要用完成时呢?你们公司不是一直都有的吗?应该用一般现在时呀;easily最好还是放在checked前面,当然你放后面也没错;can make people comfortable这里是不是有点问题呢?请问你本意也是让resume format作这句话的主语吗?一个resume format又怎麼make people comfortable??后面这句话真正的主语是什麼??? 改our company has our own resume format, which can be easily checked ...... Please check it in the accessory, and send it to the candidate in the furture. check it in the accessory要改一下,check it with the accessory,没有说check it in...的 Please feel free to contact me if you have any question.请问你想表达什麼意思呢?什麼叫feel free? 我知道你的意思,其实不用说那麼多的,你直接说please contact me if you have any question就行了,这样就已经把你要表达的所有意思都说出来了,外国人都是这麼说的 不好意思,话比较多,见谅^_^很不错哦，你可以试下
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热心网友 时间：2024-08-08 20:32

我做了一些改动，你仔细对比，有疑问再讨论
Established in March of 2004, Chuang Yi Jia Knitting Factory is located in shenzhen of China. It is a professional manufacturer and exporter and specialized in the design,development and production of flatknit rib, jacquard rib, flatknit collar, rib tape, hollow rope and other knit goods. The above products (were) applied to use in sportswear, anorak, wadded jacket, down jacke,jacke,T-shirt and other kinds. The products of the factory has got ISO9001 International Quality certification and have passed a series of international quality tests by STR and ITS.

Chuang Yi Jia Knitting Factory runs under Hong Kong Y.F industrial Co. Ltd., which (was) established in October of 2007, has been centering on quality production and punctual timing of the shipments. (这句话有问题，不知道你是想说哪个公司centering)
meanwhile Hong Kong Y.F industrial Co. Ltd. has (been) working on expanding the international market(s) over the years. Its clients now include the well-known international brands 改为companies,客户怎么可能是品牌呢 such as Adidas and Reebok. Because the business expanded rapidly, Hui Zhou Chuang Yi Jia Finery Co. Ltd was founded in September,2009，has改为is fully in charge of marketing and production ,and coordinat(ion) with the factory and the(its) HK’s office.
All these changes that took place were brought about by Chuang yi jia’s vision: To be recognized by our customers as the best knit goods supplier.

Hong Kong Y.F industrial Co. Ltd. runs under Chuang Yi Jia Knitting Factory, established in October,2007, helping the factory to center on quality production and punctual timing of the shipments.Meanwhile Hong Kong Y.F industrial Co. Ltd. has been working on expanding the international market over the years.
这句子我还是不明白到底在说哪个公司，有中文吗