发布网友 发布时间:2024-05-10 18:19
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热心网友 时间:2024-05-13 12:54
时态有问题,而且明显带有汉语化倾向!This National Day.We have seven day's holiday.On the 1st,I went to the zoo with my parents.i went to see the cinema.i was very happy,because cinema was very funny. on the 3rd,i was at home.i played computer games.i was so happy.on the 4th,i rode a bike with my friends.we were very happy.on the 5th,i swin with my parents.on the 6th,i bought prents for my friends and my parents.at the last day of the holiday,i relaxed and prepured to go back to school.热心网友 时间:2024-05-13 12:57
seven day's改为a senven-day热心网友 时间:2024-05-13 12:52
1) Today is National XX