...至24日来北京旅游,希望你帮他安排旅游期间的住宿以及

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热心网友 时间：2024-05-28 17:30

Dear John，
—I’m so glad to know that you are coming to Beijing．It so happens that my brother will be away on business through18—24，So you can stay with me if you like．I’ve made a 5-day schedule for you：the Great Wall(Day 1，on 18)，Beihai Park and my school(Day 2)，the Summer Palace(Day 3)，the Forbidden City and the Tian’anmen Square(Day 4)．Nothing special is planned for Day 5．You can do some shopping or something else．Please tell me the exact date of your arrival and your flight number so that I can meet you at the airport．
I’m looking forward to seeing you in Beijing．
Yours truly，
’                                                                     Li Hua
本文是考生非常熟悉的书信形式， John计划在2月18日至24日来北京旅游，希望你帮他安排旅游期间的住宿的情况写个回信，要点已经给出，考生要用适当的语言表达出来，不能遗漏要点，可以适当增加细节，对于考生的整理能力要求较高。写作时注意使用合理的连接词，First, What’s more等词的使用使文章更连贯，使用高级词汇和1,2两个高级句型，让文章更有档次。象这句话It so happens that my brother will be away on business through18—24，这是用了It句型，Please tell me the exact date of your arrival and your flight number so that I can meet you at the airport．这句话用了so that的句型，还有made a 5-day schedule和looking forward to这样的词组。特别注意时间表达法要正确。