...体育锻炼与少年儿童肥胖的问题。下面六幅图画

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A healthy diet and regular exercise may help to prevent obesity(肥胖) among children. Take Li Ming for example. Li Ming used to be a healthy boy, but a year ago, he fell into the habit of eating a lot of junk food and snacks. Besides, he spent a lot of time lying on the sofa, watching TV, and did little exercise. As a result, he put on so much weight that he found it difficult to climb the stairs.
What a terrible thing! Li Ming felt so sorry that he decided to change the unhealthy life style, which had done great damage to his health, though a bit difficult. He began to take up a balanced and healthy diet, containing fruit and vegetables. He also took part in various sports activities such as swimming, skating, running and playing basketball. Several months later, Li Ming became as fit as before.
Luckily, Li Ming has broken away from his former way of life. His example shows that a healthy diet and regular exercise work to prevent obesity. Those who are facing the same problem, why not have a try?

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【亮点说明】本句中的连接词使用较为合理，如besides, as a result等；同时本句中的高级句式也较多：he spent a lot of time lying on the sofa, watching TV, and did little exercise.和What a terrible thing!这个感叹句；以及定语从句 Those who are facing the same problem, why not have a try?高级词汇如：break away, obesity等等。