改正英文错误

发布网友发布时间：2024-05-01 15:26

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热心网友时间：2024-10-10 21:52

Shanghai lies in East China.
And it is famous for it night views and shopping centers.
It is also one of the largest cities in the world.
It is known as the''Shopping Paradise''because there are a lot of department stores and huge shopping centers.If you come to Shanghai,I recommend you that you can go to the Beach at night and you can see the Oriental Pearl TV Tower.
At the daytime, you can go to People's Square,the ChengHuang Temple and many other places of interest.
写得不错，但我不知道能写那么好的文章为什么还有那么多语法错误？

热心网友时间：2024-10-10 21:47

located in East china
its night
It is also one of the large cities in the world
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热心网友时间：2024-10-10 21:46

Shanghai lies in the East of China.It is an international city.And it is famous for its night view and shopping centers.It is also one of the largest city in the world.It is known as the''Shopping Paradise''because that there are a lot of department stores and huge shopping centers.If you come to Shanghai,I recommend that you can go to the Beach at night and you can see the famous Oriental Pearl TV Tower.At the daytime, you can go to People's Square,the ChengHuang Temple and many other places of interest.In a word.Welcome you.