短文改错,求大神。高一的。

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热心网友 时间：2024-05-31 13:41

第1行: 1.在English前加上an (因为talent为可数名词单数)
第2行: 2.them--it (指代上文提到的an English talent show,故用it)
第2行: 3.its--whose (whose引导定语从句,并做theme的定语)
第4行: 4.in--on (在某一天用on)
第4行: 5.requiring--required (此处应该用被动语态)
第5行: 6.giving--give (与sing,dance,tell为并列关系,故用原形give)
第6行: 7.better--good (无比较之意,故用原级good)
第6行: 8.去掉that (if引导条件状语从句,that在此多余了)
第7行: 9.could--can (此处应该用现在式)
第7行: 10.had--have (在条件状语从句中,用一般现在时表示将来的动作.)

热心网友 时间：2024-05-31 13:47

How (How--What )are you doing recently ?. There will be (加上an)English talent show in our school, so I 'm writing to invite you to watch them (them--it). The talent show, its(its --whose) theme is "English-- Bridge to the World " , will be held in our school hall from 8;30 . am to 11;30am in (in--on)the 16th September. Every class is requiring(requiring --required) to put on one performance in which students can sing songs, dance, tell stories or giving (giving -- give)speeches. I 'm sure we(we-- you) will have a better(better --good) time enjoying the performance . I 'd be very glad that if you could come, If you had(had -- have) some questions, please call me .