...不能照看你的小狗,请你写一封信给你的好朋友Tom,让他帮你照顾你的...
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时间：2024-06-01 12:10
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to tell you that I will go to Beijing with my family next week for a holiday. But I can’t look after my dog during the holiday. Could you please help me to take care of it? It is a very lovely dog. You need to feed the dog three times a day. I will prepare the food for you. It needs to drink water several times a day. After supper, would you mind having a walk with it for a while? It likes to walk every day. And its room must be clean and tidy. It’s very kind of you if you can look after it. I think the dog can also bring you happiness.
Li Hua
试题分析：这是篇命题作文。作文是以书信的形式，所以要注意书信的格式，包括称呼和署名等。作文里要包含题目中所给的要点，不能有遗漏。各信息之间可运用一些承接的词句，包括使用连词等，来加强文章的逻辑性。
【亮点说明】这封书信格式正确，要点齐全，表述准确流利。文中使用了一些非常实用的句型和短语，例如：I’m glad to tell you that I will go to Beijing with my family next week for a holiday我很高兴告诉你下周我和家人去北京度假；that引导了一个宾语从句。Could you please help me to take care of it?你能帮我照顾它吗？would you mind having a walk with it for a while?你介意带它出去散会步吗？这两个句子都是征询别人意见的句子。
