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This is a photo of my family.I have a happy family.There are five people in my family.They are my grandmother, my parents, my sister and I.The old(年老的) woman is my grandmother.The man is my father.His name is David.He is a teacher.And what about the woman? She is my mother.Her name is Linda.She is very nice.Look at the girl.That’s my sister.She is in a middle school(中学).Her name is Lucy.
Do you know the boy? It’s me
试题分析:本文是学生熟悉的话题,学生很容易把握写作要求和写作目的。考生在写作之前必须认真审题,首先要注意文章的时态,介绍自己家人的情况应该用一般现在时。注意叙述的条理性,适当使用连接词。
【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些短语,在叙述中使用了连接词,使叙述逻辑更为合理,层次更加分明,为文章增色不少.如: is from +地点。来自哪里,very much 非常等,学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。