麻烦大家帮我检查一下我自己写的英语文章,我基础有点差,谢谢

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热心网友时间：2024-02-22 19:27

"Family album USA" is (an) (interesting),outstanding litte movie.

interesting首字母是元音字母，所以要用"an"；"interest"是动词，在这里变为形容词就要改变词性interesting(有趣的);

In （this） movie, Richarrd is a photographer.

最好用this，因为上面已提到这部电影；

He is （writing） a book. It's an (American) album.

拼写错误；

He has a very happy family. Robbie is his little brother. He （goes） to high school.

要么"He is going to..."要么"He goes to...." 在这里用"goes"好一点；

Every class has a bad apple. Actually, Robbie gives teacher a big headache.

这句话没有错误，很好！^_^

In the ACT 1,Richarrd （left） his bag on the ferry.

这里用一般过去式比较好。left就是leave的过去式。

Alexandra is a Greece girl. She (brought) it back to him.

同样，这里也该用过去式。brought是bring的过去式。顺便说下，在英语中，不存在第三人称主语直接加动词原型这种情况的。

The Richarrd's family (gave) thanks for (her).

同上，用过去式"gave"比较好；thanks for her吧，thanks for it的话，Alexandra就变成物了。

She (deserved) a pat on the back,she is a (smart) lady and very nice.

同上，用过去式；拼写错误。

另外Richarrd是不是应该改为Richard呢？

热心网友时间：2024-02-22 19:28

He is going to high school
Richarrd is leaving his bag on the ferry
She brings it back to him
very nice+........
内容有点乱其他还凑合吧

热心网友时间：2024-02-22 19:28

"Family album USA"is AN interestING,outstanding litte movie. In the movie,Richarrd is a photographer.He is wRIting a book.It's an Amercian album. He has a very happy family.Robbie is his little brother.He is goING to high school.Every class has a bad apple.Actually,Robbie gives teacher a big PROBLEM. In the ACT 1,Richarrd leaveS his bag on the ferry. Alexandra is a GreeK girl. She bringS it back to him. The Richarrd's family thanks for it. She deserves a pat on the back,she is a samrt lady and very nice.
你的三单没有注意，还有是一个句子只有一个动词，你的句子有几个动词，就错了。我给你改出的都用大写标出来了，希望能帮助你，祝英语赶快提高哟！

热心网友时间：2024-02-22 19:29

[He is goes to high school.]有错is 去掉
【Robbie gives teacher a big headache】中式英语- -让老师头痛应该是
He is a big headache to his teacher
[In the ACT 1,Richarrd is leave his bag on the ferry]is leave改成left

热心网友时间：2024-02-22 19:30

"Family album USA"is an interesting,outstanding little movie. In the movie,Richarrd is a photographer.He is wirtting a book.It's an Amercian album. He has a very happy family.Robbie is his little brother.He goes to high school.Every class has a bad apple.Actually,Robbie gives the teacher a big headache. In the ACT 1,Richarrd left his bag on the ferry. Alexandra is a Greece girl. She brought it back to him. The Richarrd's family gave thanks for this. But she deceived a pat on the back.She is a smart lady and very nice.