南京青奥会将于2014年8月16日到8月28日举行,青奥会是世界上最重要赛事之...
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Hello, everyone. The Nanjing 2014 Youth Summer Olympic Games will be held from August 16 th to 28 th . It’s one of the world’s most important events. I’m proud to have the chance to be a volunteer. As students, we should learn about manners and be polite to friends from all over the world. Nanjing is developing quickly, so it’s necessary for everyone to protect the environment. For example, we should plant more trees to reduce pollution. I believe we can do something to make a big difference. Everyone should help make the event a big success.
Let’s act together! Thank you!
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