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热心网友 时间:2023-10-13 05:00
结构很重要,英语这种语言很注重逻辑性,所以。而且评卷老师在看卷子的时候,因为有太多的卷子,太多的作文,他们往往不会细看每个句子,而是取文章的首段,末段,还有中间段落的首句来看。有时候还会更简单,具体就看首段了。首段写的好,后面就看得多,首段写得很差,后面根本不会怎么看。他们会根据对文章的第一感觉来决定文章的分数范围。所以以我的看法,首段一定要精彩,吸引人,后面段与段之间的结构要严谨,末段不用太好,但要让人觉得有头有尾。这样,分数就会定格在一个比较高的范围。至于句子,能用好的句子当然要尽量用,平时要多留意精彩的句子。但在考试的时候,不要用那些不熟悉的句型,尽量用自己熟悉的句型,十拿九稳的。单词亦然。不要干些冒险的事,考试的时候试新句型或词是不值当的。平时多写写,多用用,熟悉用法再用。
Each morning I get up at 7:00. The school is 2 kilomteres away from my home. Usually I go to shool on foot. It takes me about half an hour to go along the street and arrive at school. But when it is raining hard or it is very cold, I take No, 212 Bus to school. Taking bus is much faster. It only takes about 10 minutes.
There are students in my class. Thirty students go to school by on foot because they live near the school. Forty students ride their bikes to school. They think riding a bike to school can save much time. Four students go to school by bus.They all live far from the school. Two students go to school in their parents' car.Their parents drive them to school on their way to work.
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写他叫什么名字,再说他怎样去学校,如on foot,by bus......等其他的就不是很重要了,适当加一些形容词就行了,但要保证没有语法错误
With the development of technology we are living a growingly better life. However, every coin has o sides. While we are enjoying the luxury material life, we are also doing great damage to the environment.
For example, it seems everybody holds a mobile phone and plays it whenever it's possible. We have bigger houses with more electric appliances. Many families drive their cars and motor-cycles instead of taking buses. Rich families even have more than one car. Girls change their dresses too often and boys also buy new shoes as frequently as they can. We don't jog in the open air. Instead, we run on a running machine or exercise with the machines in a gym.
In this way, we waste too much resourses and proce too much carbon in the air. To save the environment, we need to live a low-carbon life. Saving the earth is saving ourselves. Otherwise we will have no life at all when the earth finally bes our hell rather than our home.
这样写可以吗?如果满意,请采纳。谢谢!
A代表我,B代表同学或父母
A hi,***how do you go to school?
B hi,***。i usually go to school on foot/by bus.what about you ?do you go to shool on foot/by bus?
A yes./no.i always go to shool by bike/on foot /by bus```
A father how do you go to work?
B by bike.
A do you go to work by bike ?mother?
B no ,my business(公司)is far from our home ,so i aways ger there by bus.
A oh i see.
怎么说也有六十字了,在这上面还可以发挥多一些~
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There are three persons in my family.My father,my mother and I.Each of us has our own traffic tools to be our destination.
My home is not far away from school.So I usually go to school by bike,.Also,when it rains ,I will take a bus to go there.
My father works at a hospital,Butthe hospital is a little far away from my home.So everydaymy father takes his car about forty minutes tobe there.
My mother works at a bank,the bank is very far from my home.She always takes a train to be the bank.
I have a clas *** ate and he is also my good friend.He is very tall and handsome. He has short and black hair. They make him more active. He has a round face, a *** all nose, o big eyes.
Though other studebts don't think he is handsome,he is so lovely in my heart. Because he always helps me with my English and Chinese. He is so kind-hearted.
It is not very far from my home to the school. Everyday I go to school by car with my parents. But at the time they were not free, I' ll go to school by bus by myself. I like to go to school by myself, for sometimes I can meet my clas *** ates on the bus. And in the other hand, there is also the disadvantiges, for it's really crowded on the bus. Of course, there is other to go to school like the subway, or by bike...
Lily goes to school on foot. Lucy takes a bus to school. Cindy goes to school by taxi. Bob rides his bike to school.My English teacher takes a car to school.My math teacher gets to school by subway.