你是某国际学校学生会*，要为一项活动写英文通知。【写作内容】请根据以下海报内容，拟一则英文通知。
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发布时间：2022-07-27 13:59
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时间：2023-10-26 20:49
To build up mutual trust among students in the new classes, the Students’ Union is going to organise an Outward Bound activity for Senior One students, with the theme “We are a family”. It will be held in Yuexiu Park from 9:30 am to 4:00 pm next Sunday. It will feature/include a variety of activities, such as relay races and rescue games. Participants should wear sport clothes and bring their own lunch and water. Those who need to ask for leave should send an email to studentsunion@163.com before January 20th. |
试题分析：本文要求写一则书面通知。关于书面通知，要注意以下几点：一是发出通知的人或单位的名称，一般写在标志的上方或在正文后面的右下角通知的正文；二是正文要写明所做事情的具体时间、地点、概括性内容(多为书面通知的首句)、出席对象及有关注意事项。布置工作的通知要把工作内容和要求写清楚。三是通知的对象一般用第三人称；但如果带有称呼语，则用第二人称表示被通知的对象，口头通知就常用第二人称表示被通知的对象。四是通知的文体，书面通知用词贴切，语句简洁，具有书面化。 【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如build up，such as，ask for , send an email to；以及高级词汇mutual，feature，rescue等和who引导的定语从句。并注意了句子的衔接如：and，such as等等。 |
