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热心网友 时间：2022-06-17 06:09

Many people like to raise and like cat and dog such a pet.My huaband and I also raised a golden retrievers.
Before selecting the seed of dog,we saw some materials of dog of golden hair:In the 18 century,it be used in hunting and found shot down by a shotgun waterbirds.
The essayremind:see the puppy, don't worry,they ReQingJin had, after carefully watching the dog. On that day, on the contrary, we see that golden retrievers dogs, it looks particularly calm, serene and golden hair, it seems a nobleman, noble temperament conspicuous, its expression, we like it very friendly, and give it was named lisa.
And the days get lisa, it's very pleasant personality, alert, self-confidence, gentle, not easily impress strangers and its close game, it is very enthusiastic bark, after the game, we found that lisa has given us a lot of it in our hair aureate garment, my husband and I have time for her almost every day to eat beef to its superior to it, we can't put it down.
Soon after, because some of the reasons for our family, we cannot continue to raise it, just turn it gave a dog's friend. When we know it well, feel very gratified. We put on it to miss into blessings.
Thank god's creation, I feel, pets are human faithful friends. Friendly

热心网友 时间：2022-06-17 06:10

这是你翻译的
宠物

许多人可能想提高的猫，狗等宠物。我和我的丈夫提出了一个漂白头发狗。选择狗之前，植物，我们读到漂白头发狗的一些资料：在18世纪，它用来寻找和检索水禽这是拍摄的猎*瀑布。

有一篇文章，提醒：当看到小狗，不用担心，在等待的热情活力，再仔细看狗。正好相反，这天，当我们看到，漂白头发狗，似乎特别平静安宁的一个机构，金*的全羊毛，它犹如一个气质高贵的贵族，显着，其表达是非常友好的，我们喜欢它，名字叫丽莎。

这些天这是一起丽莎很高兴，它的个性是温和的，保持警惕，自信，试图请陌生人不容易，当每一次的亲密游戏，只有这样热烈流露出的呼声，在比赛结束，我们发现，丽莎赋予我们有很多的金*的头发越来越多的衣服上，有一段时间，我和丈夫准备了优越的牛肉，她几乎每天吃它，我们无法放下来它。

很快，因为我们家庭的一些原因，我们不能再继续下去，以提高它再次，只有通过对沿线的热爱棒球的朋友。当我们知道时，跨越非常好，我们感到很高兴。我们认为这种变换的祝福。

感谢上帝的创造，我认为，宠物是人类忠实的好朋友友好

Many people like keeping pets such as cats and dogs. My husband and I have also been keeping a golden dog.

In the selection of breeds, we have seen some information on Golden Dogs: In the 18th century, and found it to be used for hunting of waterfowl hunting射落.

There are articles to remind: to see the puppy, do not worry, they have a strong passion and then a close look at the dog. The contrary, that we see only the golden dogs, it seems particularly serene calm, put on a golden-yellow hair, it seems that a noble aristocratic temperament, eye-catching, it faces a very friendly, we like it名叫丽莎access to it.

And Lisa live in a very happy day, it's gentle personality, alertness, self-confidence, not easy to please a stranger, every time and its a close game, it was very warm and wow, the game ended, we found that Lisa had been It gave many of us long-haired golden in our clothes, my husband and I have a period of time almost every day to prepare for her class to eat beef to it, we love it.

Soon after, because some of the reasons our family, we can no longer continue to raise it, only to give it a dog friend. When we know that when it flies very well, am very pleased. We miss the blessing into it.

Thank God for the creation, I felt, pet friendly is a loyal friend of mankind.

热心网友 时间：2022-06-17 06:10

Pets
Many people like raise the cat and dog as their pet.my husband and I were also raised a golden hair dog. before we choose the dog, we read some information about the it: In 18th century, it used to hunt and to retrieve the waterfowl in the water which is shot by the hunter.

An article reminds: When you see the puppy, do not worry,waiting for their warm vigor is gone, and then carefully look at the dog. however, when we looking at that golden hair dog, it seems specially quiet,its body has cover with golden hair,it looks like a noble, very standout, and looks friendly. we like it a lot, so we named it Lisa.

we were happy when we stay with Lisa, it was tame, vigilant, self-confident, not easily to trust stranger, every time we played with Lisa,it always made the sweety sound, after the game ended,we noticed that Lisa left its golden color hair on our clothes,sometimes,my husband and me always gave the freshest beef for it, we were unable to leave it.
Soon, because reasons of our family, we cannot raise it anymore, so we just gave it to one of our friend who is dog lover. When we know its still great,we feel gratified. We transformed our missing to blessing.
Thanks God's creation, I feeling that pet is the friend and faithful friend for people.
上面是按你原来的文稍微改了一下,
我又看你的中文重新写了一遍,你看下可不可以:

Pets
Many people like to raise cat or dog as their pet.My husband and me were raising a golden hair dog before.
We read some information about golden hair dog before we choose the dog,it says:In 18th century, people used golden hair dog to catch and find the prey in the water which had shot by the hunters.
An essay reminds:when you seeing the puppy, you better to wait for its warm vigor has gone, then, look at it again carefully. However, she was very quiet with her friendly expression on when we looking at her. We like her, so we named her Lisa.
Those days were very happy when we stay with her. She make the friendly and sweety sound when we play with her. After the game ended, we noticed that she left her golden hair on our clothes as the gifts. Few days, my husband and me always feed her with freshest beef. We could not let her leaves us.
But after few months, we got some problem with our family, we cannot raise her anymore. So, we gave her to one of my friend who loves dogs. When we know that she still lives great, we feel gratified. We transformed our missing to blessing for her.
Thanks god's created. I feel, pets are the most friendly and faithful friend for people.

我也不大确定全对,差不多就这样.

热心网友 时间：2022-06-17 06:11

Many people like to raise like cats and dogs that pets. My husband and I have also raised a golden retrievers.
In choosing breed, we saw the dogs of some material breed in the 18th century, it: for hunting and found shot down by a shotgun waterbirds.
The essay remind: see the puppy, don't worry, they ReQingJin had, after carefully watching the dog. On that day, on the contrary, we see that golden retrievers dogs, it looks particularly calm, serene and golden hair, it seems a nobleman, noble temperament conspicuous, its expression, we like it very friendly, and give it was named lisa.
And the days get lisa, it's very pleasant personality, alert, self-confidence, gentle, not easily impress strangers and its close game, it is very enthusiastic bark, after the game, we found that lisa has given us a lot of it in our hair aureate garment, my husband and I have time for her almost every day to eat beef to its superior to it, we can't put it down.
Soon after, because some of the reasons for our family, we cannot continue to raise it, just turn it gave a dog's friend. When we know it well, feel very gratified. We put on it to miss into blessings.
Thank god's creation, I feel, pets are human faithful friends. Friendly

热心网友 时间：2022-06-17 06:12

Many people like keeping pets as dogs and cats. My husband and I also kept a golden retriedvers. Before choosing We red some materials about golden retrievers:They were kept at the aim of hunting and finding waterbirds shot by gun