雅思写作动物类题目详解--一边倒写作方法
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野生动物是否应该被保护的题目最近又一次被雅思写作提及，对于这类表达同意或者反对的题目，一边倒的写法应该怎样写，完全反对该怎么写? 下面雅思我带大家梳理雅思写作中 动物类 一边倒 文章 的写法。
雅思写作动物类题目详解--一边倒写作 方法
Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
第一个步骤是决定同不同意，还是部分同意。我的建议是完全不同意。我不认为这个题目我们可以选部分同意。
接下来，让我们组织一下四段的内容：
1.开头段： 题目复述(保护动物正确的)，然后回答问题(完全不同意)
2.第一段理由：为什么不同意。比如说保护动物是我们的责任,动物有生活在地球上的权利
3.第二段理由： 为什么不同意。比如说我们用很多资源去保护动物，但这并不算浪费资源
4. 总结 段: 重复观点/总结我们的答案
OK.接下来是最重要的了：论点。你能想想第二段第三段我们能列举哪些论据吗?
给你一个开头段的范例：
开头段(话题+一般性答案)
Some people argue that it is pointless to spend money on the protection of wild animals because we humans have no need for them. I completely disagree with this point of view.
总结段(重申我们的答案)
In conclusion, we have no right to decide whether or not wild animals should exist, and I believe that we should do everything we can to protect them.
请注意:
开头段和总结段要短小精悍，直截了当。如果你要得高分，要在主体段两段下功夫。
下面是9分 范文 ：
Wild animals have no place in the 21st century,so protecting them is a waste of resources.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people argue that it is pointless to spend money on the protection of wild animals because we humans have no need for them. I completely disagree with this point of view.
In my opinion,it is absurd to argue that wild animals have no place in the 21st century. I do not believe that planet Earth exists only for the benefit of humans, and there is nothing special about this particular century that means that we suddenly have the right to allow or encourage the extinction of any species. Furthermore, there is no compelling reason why we should let animals die out. We do not need to exploit or destroy every last square metre of land in order to feed or accommodate the world`s population. There is plenty of room for us to exist side by side with wild animals, and this should be our aim.
I also disagree with the idea that protecting animals is a waste of resources.It is usually the protection of natural habitats that ensures the survival of wild animals, and most scientists agree that these habitats are also crucial for human survival. For example, rainforests proce oxygen, absorb carbon dioxide and stabilise the Earth’s climate. If we destroyed these areas, the costs of managing the resulting changes to our planet would far outweigh the costs of conservation. By protecting wild animals and their habitats, we maintain the natural balance of all life on Earth.
In conclusion, we have no right to decide whether or not wild animals should exist, and I believe that we should do everything we can to protect them.
雅思写作范文：过于保护动物
Task：Some people argue that too much attention and too many resources are given to the protection of wild animals and birds.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Sample answer：
In recent years, animal protection has become an issue of concern. People take different attitudes towards the increasing attention and expenditure on wildlife conservation. Some people suggest that the spending should be redirected to helping other fields in society. I agree with the view that the investment in wildlife protection is not worthwhile.
Animals, as a key component of the whole food chain, have a profound impact on the sustainability of an ecosystem. As we known, every kind of animals plays an important role in natural balance. For instance, the demise of any species will lead to the growth or decline of other species. In some extreme cases, some species may at the verge of extinction such as Dodo bird. If people did not take actions to protect wildlife as soon as possible, we humans would be affected in the end.
However, there are more issues that we need to focus in our society rather than protecting animals. In current social context, the primary task is still to improve living standards since there are many people living under the poverty line. Only when people are in a good living condition, can they pay attention to other social problems. Besides, technology and ecation are another two aspects of governments to concern. These two instries accelerate the development of society, which will provide a better protection for wildlife in turn.
In conclusion, although the animal is a significant part of ecosystem, it is better for governments to invest more finance and resources in other social problems.
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雅思大 作文 审题篇之动物类话题
题目：
Some people think zoos are cruel and the zoos should be closed. However, some people think zoos are useful to protect the rare animals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
首先，我们可以确认这个题目的题型是 议论文 ，包含两类人对动物园是否应该关闭有不同看法。所以两方的观点都要写，否则违背"address all parts of the task".
接下来我们需要思考的是双方的观点，同学们可以判断哪些观点是合乎题目要求的：
赞成动物园应该关闭的观点：
1.动物园应该关闭因为它破坏了生态平衡。
2.动物园应该关闭因为它*了动物的自由。
3.动物园应该关闭因为它导致动物们失去生活本能。
赞成动物园有用的观点
1.动物园是休闲娱乐的好去处，缓解压力。
2.动物园保护濒危动物不被偷猎。
3.动物园提高人们保护濒危动物的意识
认真审题的同学们一定注意到了题目中的表达zoos are cruel and the zoos should be closed,意思是动物园应该被关闭是指对动物是残忍的，所以赞成动物园应该关闭的理由中观点1 不符合要求，与环境无关。
另外题目中另一些人认为zoos can protect the rare animals ,对象是rare animals,与它无关的都算走题。因此赞成动物园有用的观点中的第一个也不扣题。
最后符合题目的观点应该是
1.agree to close the zoo
1)The zoo restricts the freedom of animals.
2)Animals are forced to change their instincts in the zoo.
2.agree that the zoo protects the rare animals
1) Zoos prevent rare animals from being poached
2) Zoos play a role in raising people's awareness to protect wild animals.
今天审题讲解就分享到这里，希望大家平时多做审题练习。
