如何准确表达托福写作观点
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发布时间：2022-04-23 08:17
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热心网友
时间：2022-06-18 06:22
托福写作怎样表达自己的观点?天道培训老师为大家带来托福独立写作让步、两边倒以及部分肯定的写作方法。
首先，托福写作让步法
让步的写作就是指屈服一下，把观点抽回来一部分。例如：如果托福独立写作中间段的前两段是从支持的角度出发，那么第三段就是从反对的角度出发。
例题：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Traveling led by a tour guide is better than traveling by oneself. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
题目中两个比较的对象是：traveling led by a tour guide和traveling by oneself。我们从同意的角度，运用让步的方法来写的话，那么文章的写作论点就应该是(前两个同意，后一个反对)：
分论点1:The tour guide can assist tourists in saving plenty of time.
分论点2:It is likely to make friends in the tour group ring the journey.
分论点3:However, people traveling by oneself can arrange the places of interest and time in a flexible way.
注意：站在对立面的角度，不要过分渲染大力铺陈，超越自己的立场，否则会造成立场模糊不清。
其次，两边倒的写作方法
两边倒的写作方法指不站在题目的任何一个角度，在论述过程中会涵盖题目正反两面的观点。
例如：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Living in a small town is better than living in a big city. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
观点: Both sides are good depending on different criteria.
分论点1: If living in small towns, people will have less work pressure and more spare time.
分论点2: Big cities can provide people with advanced ecation, medical facilities and transportation.
从上面给出的写作的思路可以看出，两边倒的写作方法就是帮*生能够从题目双边观点进行讨论。
最后，部分肯定式写法
这类是指含有极限词的题目，例如：题目中含有only, best, all, must等词汇。对于含有绝对词的题目，我们一般采取题目的对立面来论述。
例如：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is only worth watching movies that can teach us something about real life. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
题目中含有“only”这个极限词，所以我们从反对的角度来拓展文章的内容会比较简单。
Disagree：
分论点1:It is indeed worth watching movies teaching us something about real life.
分论点2:Science fiction movie is also valuable for it con expand people's imagination.
分论点3:Because the purpose of watching movie is to relax and get entertainment, so the movies that can realize this purpose are also meaningful.
热心网友
时间：2022-06-18 06:22
托福写作简化第一种方法是用一个单词代替一组意义相同的单词
比如：
①用forget(忘记)代替do not remember(没有记住)
②用ignore(忽视)代替do not pay attention to(不注意)
③用now(现在)代替at this point in time(此时此刻)
④用because(由于)代替e to the fact that(鉴于下列事实)
托福 写作 简化第二种方法是省略同义词或近义词
比如在下面例句中，形容词important(重要的)和significant(有重要意义的)，就是两个同义词(也可以说是近义词)，我们可以省略important，只保留significant。
①The government project is important and significant.(这项*计划是重要的，有重要意义。)
②The government project is significant.(这项*计划有重要意义。)
托福写作 简化第三种方法是在不改变句子含义的前提下，省略所有可以省略的单词
比如在下面例句中，the cover of the book (书的封面)可以省略成the book cover，is red in color(是红色的)可以省略成is red。
①The cover of the book is red in color.(书的封面是红色的)
②The book cover is red.(书的封面是红色的)
最后我们把这三种方法结合起来，将一个冗长、绕嘴的句子，改写成一个简短、易懂的句子。
①University malls must be accessible and free from congestion in order that students， faculty and employees may have unobstructed passage
through those areas of the campus.(校内道路必须是便于通行的，不拥堵的，以便让学生、教师和职员能够无阻碍地通过，到达校园的各处。)
②University malls must be free enough from congestion to allow people to walk through easily.(校内道路不应当拥堵，以便人们顺利通行。)
在托福写作中要慎用过于复杂的难句，这样做不仅会增加因语法问题失分的可能性，也会对你的托福作文大打折扣，托福写作中大家要量力而为。
