英文作文:求语法修正
发布网友
发布时间：2022-11-08 17:02
共4个回答
热心网友
时间：2023-11-10 16:00
I think Macao is a good place to live in , where clothing,food,housing and work, none of them is a problem, Although many more people here have a lot of money, a few are very poor, Most people can have enough to eat and wear, unlike the people in other places that have disaters, such as earthquakes and floodings The tsunami disaster does not happen in Miacao. Whether astronomically, geographically or politiaclly, Macao is very good indeed.
Although we have the largest population density in the world,and the geographical environment is not very good and the the air here is not very fresh, Mocao has a very good economy, so Macao people can enjoy a lot of social welfare benefits, like:bus service , school ecation, medical welfare, a lot of employment opportunities and the spect of seurity. Few other cities can do as well as Macao.in the above mentioned aspects
Althoug Macao is a very small place, it has a lot of things from all over the world , it is a pluralistic society. with direct contact with the rest of the world , There is full freedom,and full demcorary here ,so Macao is a very special place. Life in Macao, I think, iis very much blessed, for the living conditions here are better than those anywhere else , Macao is very satisfactory to me except for a little air pollution and noise pollution. Not at all do I need to worry living here in Macao every day because its security is good, its economy is good, and there is little possibility of a disaster whatsoever ,
I believe there are few places in the world that are as good as or better than Macao concerning the living conditions and the social welfare benefits that people receive and enjoy.
热心网友
时间：2023-11-10 16:01
1. basic necessities 就好了，不用加 of life. without problem也可以删去，如果非要写，那就写without any problem(s).
2. rich and poor 改为the rich and the poor.
3. most people can earn a living 单复数不一致，应该写成: most people can earn their livings.
4. ...location is ideal and natural disasters are unlikely to happen就好了，不必seems to be, 也不必it's, some等中式用法.
5. Thanks to the Government, 不必owing to political management,
6. Macao is stable and safe, 当然in good order也说得过去。
7. living space is congested e to high population density. 人口密度高导致人均居住空间狭窄。比1楼的写法地道。
8. ...transportation and so on, 改为 transportations and many others地道些。
还有不少了，自己修改下吧。
热心网友
时间：2023-11-10 16:01
I think Macao is a good place to live in. The basic necessities of life can be satisfied without problem. Although there also exists wealth gap between rich and poor, most people can earn a living. Besides, the geographical location seems to be ideal and it is unlikely to have some natural disasters. Owing to its political management, Macao is in good order as well.
In Macao, since many people live here and the living space is not big enough, the air is not very fresh and it has the problem of pollution. However, Mocao’s economy is better than its neighbors.As a result, Macao people can enjoy a lot of benefits from it, The local government can put more money to solve the problems such as pollution, transportation and so on.
Small as Macao is ,it is a pluralistic society. A variety of things from foreign countries are available here and It has close links with the world. People can feel freedom ,democrary and security.It is a very special place with wonderful living conditions .
In my view, Macau is a good choice for living.
热心网友
时间：2023-11-10 16:02
智能地进行英语文本纠错（拼写、语法、样式和句子不完整）
百度下易改就有了
