这是我的英文简历,谁能帮帮找找语法错误~

发布网友发布时间：2022-07-01 04:21

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热心网友时间：2023-10-18 17:57

1. 就直接用Resume，这一点上用常用的就好
2. "INDIVIDUALINFO" --- Personal Info.
3. 电话写一个就好
4. 出生日期或者年龄至少要有一项
5. Job responsibility的第一条 --- Take charge of 改成 Responsible for，receipting 改为receiving或answering; process their treatment??? 不知是什么意思，最后应该是to them.
6. Analysis the data of sales. --- Sales analysis
7. draw some rules and regulations

.....自己还是再好好改一下，有些用词似乎不是很妥当，再注意下单复数，你们的客人或者同事都不止一个吧

热心网友时间：2023-10-18 17:58

3. Analysis the data of sales.
should be: sales data analysis
4. CooperatING with sales specialist to finish the sales process successfully.

and so on...