英文语法。 帮我改改- my tenses
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时间：2023-10-12 08:19
Children scattered around her. They were all chatting and playing tips with one another. No matter what they kept themselves busy with, they all seemed to have a sense of belonging… a place to go…a thing to do. It was Mufti Day today (如果是今天,就不能过过去时态.你自己改.), so everyone was dressed up with their best clothes.
The once ll grey playground was immediately lit up by the colour of the rainbow. The children jumped here and there like a fresh packet of cheerful jellybeans. But for the little girl, she was in her school uniform standing lonely under the Oak Tree. She felt cold with school's playground.
问题补充：She sat down besides the pile of oak tree leaves, and took out her lunch box. Attracted with the delicious smell of fried rice, she got out her chopsticks and started eating. Nice and warm…..mmmm!
‘It's not too bad to being alone, maybe.” she thought herself.
“Don’t be silly dear, being alone is terrible. I’ve been alone for so many years till now.”
It seems strange because no one was around her at the time so she was shortly confused by the strange voice.
“ Try and make new friends, or if you want, you can be my friend”
There was that voice again…she looked around and realized that the voice was coming from the oak tree.
Since that day, she has found a new friend, her only friend: the old oak tree. Every lunch time, one can find her next to the tree. No one knew why but most of them tried to avoid her since she seems (你到底要用什么时态呢?注意时态统一)to be a bit crazy. Talking to a tree is never a normal thing to do.
But, she knew that this is (同上,注意时态.这里应该改称was) not true.
改了很多,自己看吧.希望你学习进步1
