求教英文高手,帮忙看下文法或短语错误和怎样修正,谢谢啦

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热心网友 时间：2024-12-04 18:05

改后正确文字：I am a Furniture designer. I like my job. It brings a lot of fun and challenges for me. Though it will be frustrated sometimes, I still feel excited especially when the new and innovative procts are designed by me. I will feel satisfied and worthwhile when people buy my designs.These house procts will enter thousands of families, making people's lives more convenient and beautful. Thinking about my job could change people's living surrounding that I feel powerful and I determine to work harder and design more and better procts for the society.

符号说明，因为改得地方太多了，我怕你看晕掉，我解释下符号的意思
（）里面的是你原来写的，有错误的，我把错误原因和不用的词都括到里面了
有一个THAT 我直接用来替换了个逗号，你逗号太多了，我真的好揪心啊。。。。
一句一句一字一字给你改的，应该是完全没问题了，只是句子结构确实都太简单了，不过也不能强求，这样无错就差不多了。希望采纳，我改了那么久啊，我的脑细胞。

I am a Furniture designer（,英语一个句子成分齐全了，只要不是重句，分句或者并列句就不要老是以逗号来连接句子，它没这功能）. I like my job（,）. (it句号后面首字母大写) It brings a lot of fun and challenges(一般为可数，所以加S或者前面加冠词，做“挑战性”时为不可数) for me. Though it will（would如果不是虚拟状态或者不可能发生的事还是少用WOULD，会给人造成误解) be frustrated sometimes, (but用了though就不用再用but了，多余了，though本来就有 虽然 。。。但是。。。的意思了) I still feel excited especially when the new and （innovated 词性误用，这个是动词，不是形容词）innovative procts （were不用虚拟，也不用过去时，一般现在时就可以了，表示一个长期事实）are designed by me. I will (would 同理，你活在现实世界，老大不要随时虚拟，。。。)feel satisfied and (worth) worthwhile when people buy my designs(the stuff I designed简洁点嘛). These house procts will enter thousands of families, making people's lives more convenient and beautful. Thinking about my job could change people's living surrounding（environment其实这个词大了，指自然环境多用此词，日常环境用surrounding足以）that (把句子结构给你改了，姐看逗号看得心紧了)I （would保持前后时态一致） feel powerful and I determine to work harder (hard work为名词词组，不可当动词用,并且用比较级跟BETTER一致) and design more and better procts for the society.

参考资料：英语专业，绝对原创

热心网友 时间：2024-12-04 18:06

修改后：
I am a furniture designer. I like my job. It brings a lot of fun and challenge for me. Though it can be frustrating sometimes, I still feel excited at work, especially when new and innovative procts are designed by me. I feel satisfied and worthy when people buy the stuff I designed. These house procts will enter thousands of families, making people's lives more convenient and beautiful. Knowing that my job could change people's living environment, I feel powerful and am determined to work harder and design more and better procts for society.

不要滥用 would。表示你的习惯状态或行为 应该用一般现在时。最后一句用could表示委婉、谦虚。

热心网友 时间：2024-12-04 18:06

I am a furniture designer. I like my job, and it brings a lot of fun and challenges to me. Though it can be frustrating sometimes, I still feel excited especially when the new and innovative procts are designed by me. I would feel satisfied and think it is worthy when people buy the stuff designed by me. These house procts will enter thousands of families, making people's life more convenient and beautiful. Thinking that my job could change people's living environment, I feel very powerful. And I'm determined to work harder and design more and better procts for the society.
不能直接用I feel worthy， 生活就用life就好了
保证正确哦 其他的楼上的基本改过来了 小丸子没脾气翻的和我有点像 绝对原创

热心网友 时间：2024-12-04 18:07

I am a Furniture designer.
I like my job because it brings me a lot of fun and challenge.
It is frustrated sometimes, but I still feel excited, especially when I successfully disigned new and innovative procts.
when people buy my work, when these pieces of procts become a part of thousands of families and making their lives more convenient and beautful, it makes me feel satisfied and worthy.
As soon as thinking about my job could change people's living environment, I am filled with strength.And I determine to hard work in order to design more and more better procts for society.
大家说了很多的语法问题我就不说了，我觉得还要在叙述逻辑和表达方式上做一些修改，这样更自然一些。
希望能帮到你

热心网友 时间：2024-12-04 18:07

I am a Furniture designer, I like my job, it brings a lot of fun and challenge for (to)me. Though it would be frustrated sometimes, but (删掉)I still feel excited especially when the new and innovated procts were （删掉）designed by me. I would feel satisfied and worth（worthy） when people buy the stuff I designed. These house procts will enter thousands of families, making people's lives more convenient and beautful. Thinking about my job could change people's living environment, I would feel powerful and I determine to hard work(work hard) and design more and better procts for the society.