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发布网友发布时间：2023-03-01 07:34

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热心网友时间：2023-11-24 23:02

Hello, everyone(Ladies and gentleman)!
My topic today is Lantern Festival. I hope you will enjoy it.
The Lantern Festival is an important day after the Spring Festival. It is on the 15th of the first lunar month. People celebrate this day, because it is the end of the Spring Festival and a new start for farming and working. The full moon in the night reminds people of the family reunion, and from this day on, some of them may leave for their work. So, on the festival, all the family members gether together and eat sweet mplings. Sweet mplings represent family reunions. And in the evening, there are many lantern performances to celebrate the first full moon of the year and a new beginning of the working year.
It is a day with a full round moon in the sky, many beautiful lanterns in the streets, sweet happiness on the face, and new hopes in the mind.
Lantern Festival is an end of the spring festival, an beginning of the working year; people gether to celebrate their gathering, they are ready to depart for another reunion. They light the lantern to shine their way on, and on... with a new hope.
That's all.
Thank you!

热心网友时间：2023-11-24 23:03

Hello ,everyone ,today I'm going to make a speech and I hope everyone would listen carefully. The Lantern Festern is an important festival after the Spring Festival .During the festival. people are used to eat sweet mplings . The whole family makes sweet mplings together which is a symbol for family reunions. People will go to the street to watch lanterns which are all around everywhere.Lanterns are very beautiful and people are happy.It is because they can get along together.

热心网友时间：2023-11-24 23:03

today is my turn to make a speech
i hope everyone listern to carefully
people will eat
and families make sweet mpling together
sweet mpling is regarded as a symblo of reunion of families
in this day people can go out for seeing lanterns
and streets are full of lanterns
they are very beautifull
and people are very happy
because they can be together with their famliy members

热心网友时间：2023-11-24 23:04

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