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热心网友 时间：2023-10-13 09:13

情书啊这是, 写得小有韵律；为符合英语的习惯体现语言的美感和简明扼要，在不妨害原文意思的前提下，我对部分语句作出一些改动，比如：

1.第一句“你并不孤独”改成“你不会孤单”，因为照文中的意思来说，笔者并不在心上人的身边，所以后者更确切些。

2.第二句“如果你愿意现在我们见个面？”太冗杂，删除“现在我们见个面？”和后面一句合并为一句……（后面都是些类似的，省略）

You won't be lonely, because I'm yours, will it be possible to see you? If you feel like it, I'll immediately go by air and join you as soon as I can, I promise to accompany you as a friend, even if you are reluctant to see me now, surely I will go there and look for you years later. Don't forget my name, my phone number, I swear to my Lord Jesus that I will always waiting, waiting for you...Give me a chance, you will find a thousand reasons to fall in love with me. I'm waiting for your answer, no matter how long it will be, one month or the rest of my life.

I see your fear about marriage, that's why you remain single all these years. Though your parents' divorce has some effect on you, however, you're a man/woman（注意这里二选一哦！不过我猜是写给洋妞的^U^）who don't want to be responsible for affection, you can share with others only in joys, not in troubles， I won't go blaming you, it's you that I love, you're passionate, naturally forgetful, disloyal to love, from the past, yet now. I look forward to be with you for ever, but I know, you just enjoy toying in love, and lavishing your love like a honey-bee visiting the flowers. Thus I dare not ask for excessive love from you, but I still expect that someday, you'll see my persistence, and I see that in the very core of your heart, you extremely need to be loved.

But, my dear, whatever kind of person you are, whether we will be together or not, I'll always love you. You won't be lonly because I'm with you, I love you only, if we can't be together, I wish to live forever in your heart, even if there is only a day in a year, that I stay in your heart quietly, I beg you, this is the first and maybe the last requirement of mine, thank you...I love you...good bye my dear, goodbye...goodbye or farewell.

译完了，怎么就那么耳熟呢，第二段摘的不是《一个陌生女人的来信》中的句子么？“感情炙热、生性健忘、爱不忠诚”。

发现一个问题，楼主请注意，第一段写要守候一生，可是第三段明显有那么一点儿诀别（就是自绝、自杀）的意思，这个难道不会产生矛盾么？

热心网友 时间：2023-10-13 09:14

非常非常的多嘴一句：这应该是给外国人写的情书吧？话说这东西就算别人帮着翻译好了赢得美人归了（假设看信方是个MM），最后还不是得当事人自己去跟外国MM去做其他日常交流吗？写信重要的不是空洞的辞藻和文采，重要的是真心真意，尤其是情书。

一言蔽之，Attitude is everything.有了态度了，什么都好说。

lz也应该不是不懂英语的人，能跟MM混到这个地步了证明交流能力也不差，还是建议lz写自己的情书，不要让别人翻去吧。

多嘴完了，想扔砖头的都来吧。

热心网友 时间：2023-10-13 09:14

You are not alone because you have a face I see us all right? If you are willing to now we see a face? I would immediately buy air tickets to you where I will go to the same friend to accompany you if you are now and I do not want to meet a few years I will find you where you remember my name my phone I told Jesus swear I will never wait for you I'll wait for you ........ give me a chance you will find 1000 Fall in love with my reasons I have waited for you for giving me the answer you give me a month to answer a month I'll wait for you a lifetime do not give me a lifetime I'll wait for you to answer
Afraid I see you get married so you have been all these years although you are single divorced parents you have a certain impact but if I may say you are a reluctant to the feelings of the people in charge and the person you can with the well-being of others and others should not go through thick but I do not blame your love is this love you: feeling hot naturally forgetful of your past love infidelity is still so
Although I am looking forward to Forever together with you but I know this person you only enjoy free play in the love of your intention to only resort to the same flowers bees love so unwilling to love the face of the person responsible for your love I dare not ask But I still look forward to looking forward to love you are willing to be responsible for the day because in your eyes I saw the dedication that I see in your heart of hearts is extremely need someone to love
But darling no matter what you are No matter what kind of person we would be together Forever I will love you, I have you alone I will never love you If we can not with that I am willing to live forever in your mind even a year Only the day quietly in your heart, I pray you to do so this is my first request may also be the last one asked me to thank you ....... love .... see you darling see you later .. See you soon ... or Farewell
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热心网友 时间：2023-10-13 09:15

You are not alone because you have a face I see us all right? If you are willing to now we see a face? I would immediately buy air tickets to you where I will go to the same friend to accompany you if you are now and I do not want to meet a few years I will find you where you remember my name my phone I told Jesus swear I will never wait for you I'll wait for you ........ give me a chance you will find 1000 Fall in love with my reasons I have waited for you for giving me the answer you give me a month to answer a month I'll wait for you a lifetime do not give me a lifetime I'll wait for you to answer
Afraid I see you get married so you have been all these years although you are single divorced parents you have a certain impact but if I may say you are a reluctant to the feelings of the people in charge and the person you can with the well-being of others and others should not go through thick but I do not blame your love is this love you: feeling hot naturally forgetful of your past love infidelity is still so
Although I am looking forward to Forever together with you but I know this person you only enjoy free play in the love of your intention to only resort to the same flowers bees love so unwilling to love the face of the person responsible for your love I dare not ask But I still look forward to looking forward to love you are willing to be responsible for the day because in your eyes I saw the dedication that I see in your heart of hearts is extremely need someone to love
But darling no matter what you are No matter what kind of person we would be together Forever I will love you, I have you alone I will never love you If we can not with that I am willing to live forever in your mind even a year Only the day quietly in your heart, I pray you to do so this is my first request may also be the last one asked me to thank you ....... love .... see you darling see you later .. See you soon ... or Farewell

Copy completed tasks giggle hee hee

热心网友 时间：2023-10-13 09:15

You are not alone because you have my we meet? If you want to meet us now? I'll go buy a ticket to your friends will like to accompany you even if you don't like and I met several years later, I will come to you find you remember my name I call my Lord Jesus, I swear to you... wait forever I gave me a chance you'll find a thousand reasons I wait for my love of you gave me a month to answer you answer me, I wait for a month, I don't give you answer my life
I understand you have you so afraid of marriage is single, although your parents' divorce has certain influence on you, but to tell you the truth, you are a reluctant to feelings of people you can with others happy and not against adversity but I don't you I love you is this your feelings: not loyal love is forgetful hot is now your past or so
Although I expect and you together forever, but I know you love the people just like in free play you only willing to erupt as a bee does flowers of love so facing unwilling to charge of your love I dare not crave love but I still looking forward looking forward to meeting you for the day because of love for in your eyes I saw that I know in your heart is extremely need someone to love
But dear regardless of what kind of person you are whether we will be together, I will love you always have me you are never alone, I only love you and if we can't be together at that I would like to live in your heart forever, even only one day in a year you quietly I beg you to do this, this is my first requests may be the last request I thank you... I love you...... bye bye bye honey or goodbye

热心网友 时间：2023-10-13 09:16

You're not alone coz i'm by your side.I'll go to find you by plane just right now if you want,may i?I'll be with you just like a friend,Even if you don't wanna see me ,many years later i'll still go to find you.Please remenber my name,my telephone number,i can promise to the God i'll wait for you,forever.
please give me a chance,you'll find 1 thousand reasons to love me,i'll spend all my lifetime to wait for your answer.
I know you're scared marriage,you're single for many years,Your parents's marriage has deep infection to you (你父母的婚姻对你有很大影响,我觉得这样比较好)But frankly speaking,you don't have enough responsability
to treat a series oflove(觉得中间的写的不太...好,所以不翻)
最后一段:But my dear,no matter who you are,not matter what kind of result we'll have,i'll be with you ,you're my only love,if i couldn't be with you,Please let me in your heart,whatever one year or just one day,i beg you.Ijust wish you can do this for me,it's maybe my only and last requirement.
Thank you ,my love,goodbye,goodbye...maybe i'll have no chance to farewell with you any more.
我发誓,我全是自己翻的!
中间那段完全是在谴责别人,和下面的那段的无私奉献相悖!所以我没翻,希望LZ三思!