雅思写作范文年轻人可否应当遵守传统
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时间：2022-06-22 09:41
Some people think that young people
should follow traditions of their society, and others think that young
people should be free to behave as indivials.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
题目大致意思：到底年轻人(1)是应该遵守传统，(2)还是可以被允许有自由的行为?
*模板：起3承6转6合3
起--允许年轻人自由取舍传统，视传统为历史的导师，而不是未来的狱警。
承--(舍其劣)年轻人自由抗拒不好的传统束缚，如此社会才能进化。
转--(取其优)全力保卫优良的传统价值，如此相传社会的文化遗产。
合--年轻人在行为上分辨理性的活传统与非理性的死传统。
IELTS Example Essay
Every
generation, young and old, should be allowed freedom to deal with the
breaking down of certain patterns and standards being handed down from
the past. As indivials, young people are particularly keen to the need
to end whatever tradition they think is unreasonable for the society.
All rebellious minds think alike--tradition is a guide for the past but
not a jailer for the future.
Too often young men and women are
enthusiastic about the evolution of beliefs and practices of their
society, and their behaviors tend to challenge a number of elements of
tradition. For that matter, mental independence is required because
without an amount of freedom, tradition would be only an explanation for
acting in conformity without thinking independently.
Accordingly,
young people ought not to be forced to express their new feelings in a
mummified form, otherwise the evolution in tradition could not happen.
The point is that not just because something is traditional, so there is
reason enough to do it. It is good, however, for young people to
continue a worthwhile tradition, and it is also good not to be captive
of an unreasonable tradition which is not worth having. Although social
bondage persists, it makes a difference if young people are permitted to
think and act in such a way as different from that of a conservative
mind in which the word 'tradition' means a shortcut to thinking or an
excuse for acting.
Probably a society can only successfully
function with traditional values--diverse customs, thoughts, lifestyles,
religion, music, dance, arts and languages, among other things of
culture. Young people had better learn that modern traditions are built
on the past just as the past was built on the times that went before it.
Traditions bring continuity to one's existence in a society, even
though this sort of continuity is precisely what has been increasingly
lost through modernity.
Thus, it behooves young indivials to
preserve their traditions of value by safeguarding against the negative
influence from various factors such as instrialization, globalization,
and assimilation or marginalization of special cultural groups. It
certainly makes patriotic sense that young people's love for traditions
worth continuing always strengthens the well-being of the society and
never weakens all that is meant to identify themselves with their
country. Good tradition being a good guide, young people, however
rebellious, should not be entirely negative about the past with all its
enring heritages and necessary evils.
In conclusion, since a
modern society is not supposed to be a dead community, young people may
behave freely in treating tradition as the living faith of the dead and
not as the dead faith of the living. They should not believe in
traditions simply because many beliefs and practices have been handed
down for many generations, but should instead observe and analyze
anything that agrees with reason and is conctive to the good and
benefit of the society. It takes a lot of history to make a tradition,
so the best of which must be accepted and lived up to, from generation
to generation.
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