发布网友 发布时间:2022-04-20 03:09
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热心网友 时间:2023-09-27 17:16
短文:
Yesterday was my birthday, so some of my classmates sent me presents. Mother prepared a tea party for me. I invited all of them to come and take part in it.The tea party began at half past six.
昨天是我生日,所以有几位我的同班同学送我礼。母亲给我准备一个茶会。我邀请他们都前来参加。茶会下午六点半开始。
技巧:
1、 文字要连贯。 除了要用 however, and 等连词外,遇到并列的事情时,要用“in the first place?? in the second place?? the last but not least important??”这样的连接词。否则 不得分!用“in the first place”代替“firstly”可增加很多字数。
2、 采用高级的句式。 如主语+插入语+谓语+宾语:Nanning, my hometown, is??. Native to China, Panda is lovely. 又如:Can I send you the money via web? Since my university, which is located in Nanning, is far away from the down town area, and I’m fully occupied by studies.
3、 重要的事情先说,开门见山。
热心网友 时间:2023-09-27 17:16
写作思路及要点:审清题目,确定中心,选择材料。
This summer vacation, I read a book called Andersen's fairy tales.
今年暑假,我读了一本叫安徒生童话的书。
This book has many interesting stories. I can't forget a story in this book, the ugly ckling. It is lonely and no animal will play with it.
这本书有很多有趣的故事。我忘不了这本书的一个故事,丑小鸭。它是孤独的,没有动物会和它玩。
In the cold winter, it almost froze to death in the forest. However, it finally through its own efforts. It became a beautiful swan. It is no longer an ugly ck.
在寒冷的冬天,它几乎冻死在森林里。然而,它最终通过自己的努力。它变成了一只美丽的天鹅。它不再是一只丑鸭子了。
This story tells us: in the face of injustice, only through their own efforts can they have happiness and happiness.
这个故事告诉我们:面对不公,只有通过自己的努力,才能拥有幸福和快乐。
热心网友 时间:2023-09-27 17:16
It was a sunny day today.I went to a park with my parents and we had fun together.热心网友 时间:2023-09-27 17:17
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