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编者按:对于要出国留学的人来说,托福考试是重中之重的事情。如何考好托福,关键是有要有一篇好的范文。下面我们来看看吧!
20180127托福独立写作
范文:
For most students, the first year in university is particularly challenging, due to the mounting pressure of academic study and busy campus life. In consideration to students’ difficulties, measures should be taken to assist students to achieve success in university. In my opinion, to guarantee the high quality education in high schools is more effective than providing university tutors’ individual instruction and encouragement from family and friends.
In the first place, the time spent in high school is critical for students to effectively prepare for the study in university or college. With the guidance of excellent teachers, students are able to obtain basic knowledge and nurture good study habit. A professional teacher plays an important role in conveying knowledge, arousing students’ interests, inspiring students to think and encouraging hard work. With effective preparation in high school, students will feel comparatively easier to catch up in university. For example, before university, it is necessary for a student to develop certain study skills, such as note taking, essay writing, and time managing. All these are essential for them to cope with subjects that are more demanding in university.
Secondly, neither tutors’ individual instruction nor encouragement from family and friends can feasibly help students achieve academic success. Given the large number of students in a department, it is difficult for tutors to spare enough time to help each student. Possibly, students will have troubles making appointment and tutors will complain the extra burden. In addition, although encouragement is vital for students, family and friends can hardly provide any practical suggestions. Cheered up by beloved ones, students are still feeling confused and having no idea how to solve problems in study.
To sum up, the high quality education in high school is the key for students to succeed in university. On the contrary, tutors’ help as well as families’ and friends’ encouragement turn out to be less effective.
20180127托福独立写作题目:
重复20170325托福独立写作
What is most important for students to succeed at university or college:
1 university tutor’s individual instructions to help solve students’ problems
2 encouragement from family and friends
3 high-quality education in the high school by excellent teachers
三选一的题目,看似新题,但其实很好写:
如果选
大学辅导老师:
有针对性的帮助学生解决学习中的问题
家庭朋友鼓励:
让学生有信心,激发学生的潜力
高质量的高中教育:
在高中阶段打好基础
作者:Cindy
公众号:英文写作素材
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一.常用论点/理由
针对独立写作的常见话题,大致可归成三类:个人类(关于学习、工作、休闲、做人的选择);古今类(题目中有明显的now… past … 让考生判断现在和过去在某一方面的比较);决策类(题目中通常有government这个词出现,讨论*的投资或者*,有些题目虽然没有government这个词出现,但如果涉及的是有社会影响力的话题,也可以划为*类,比如 A/D Professional athletes such as the football playerand basketball player deserve high salaries that they are paid.)
1)个人类常用理由
学知识、练技能、拓展视野……..
工作机会、赚钱…….
交朋友、陪伴家人……. (合作、沟通) …….
品质(自信,独立,坚持,乐观 ) / 兴趣爱好
身体健康、放松心情…….
省时间、省钱、省精力………..
2)古今类常用理由
现代社会的优点:
教育: 先进全面鼓励个性
工作:种类丰富机会多
医疗:治愈缓解更多疾病
技术:网络电子产品汽车
公共设施:便利的交通娱乐购物餐饮
法律制度:保障个*利
媒体:揭露*传播信息
人与人:互动频繁、方便
经济进步:更充裕的钱和无助
世界和平:更少的战争伤亡
现代社会的缺点:
环境问题(污染,能源消耗)
生活压力(学习,工作)
欺骗敲诈
3)决策类常用思路
注:除了使用个人类常用理由,针对决策类这种和*相关有社会影响力的题目,建议多角度讨论,一下是常见的讨论角度:
1.大众 indivials
对我们有什么用?(放松健康省钱知识关系等等)
是不是我们每个人都需要的?(大多数/ 小众)
2. 相关群体relativegroups
题目中谈论到的比如artists,scientists, athletes 等等
3. 企业companies
企业有钱,可以代替*去投资有利可图的领域
4. 社会 Society
Economy(tourism), culture, safety, improvement …
二、对比段
通常来说,托福独立写作的论证写3段,上文介绍了最基本的常用理由,但有时候,因为各种原因只想出2个理由的时候,可以写一段对比段,即把对比论证写一段。
三、让步段
除了对比段之外,让步段也可以解决只有2个理由缺少第三个段落的问题。
四、拆分法/分情况讨论
针对一些比较抽象的独立写作话题,我们可以分情况讨论,或者对于关键词进行定义和拆分,在更加具体的情况下方便论证。
五、检验论点
没有标准答案,这是独立解题最自由的地方。但这并不意味着什么样的理由都可以作为论点并且展开段落的。课堂上,一些学生可以马上相处三个理由,但仔细探究,可能只有一个理由是可以作为论点的。
这里说一下三个检验标准:1.支持观点 2. 论点相互不重叠 3. 易于展开
六、灵活调整
根据ETS的出题,我们知道,题目是千变万化的,为了帮助学生更好的应对,老师们会总结出一些实用方法,对学生来说,比死记硬别、生搬硬套更重要的是,在题目的练习中,去运用这些方法,并且灵活的调整。
如果觉得一些常用理由不适合支持某一道题,那么就放弃这个理由;
如果只想出两个理由,那么可以加一个让步段或者对比段;
如果一道题直接用常用理由去支持很难,可以试着拆分法;
如果完全同意/不同意很难,可以试着两边倒;
如果题目中有绝对词,可以部分同意/不同意。