英语高手能不能指出我这篇作文的错误呢！十分感谢，在批改网上越改越低分我都快哭了！！

发布网友发布时间：2022-05-12 21:31

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热心网友时间：2023-10-23 20:22

Learning Resource 没有必要都大写

As far as they are concerned, Internet has become more and more popular这句话没动，改成useful会好一点？

We should do somethings to make the best use of the advantages and avoid its disadvantages.新段落确定还可以用it指代？ best use of the advantages 直译是发扬优点，可以直接说make the best use of the internet and avoid itsdis
Firstly, look through the formal websites. Secondly, think a while before you find the answers on the Internet. Last but not lease, don't surf the Internet for a long time.

当你逻辑足够清晰的时候，不用使用第一第二第三，读者自己会数数。
能把批改网的网址给我一下吗？可能这样会比较有针对性追问

批改网上指出那么多错误我已经很迷茫了呜呜！！

追答Learning Resource which on the Internet

that ，还有直接说learning from the Internet 不好吗？
Some agree with this view 主语

As far as they are concerned, Internet has become more and more popular 不懂
在汉语中的“学习知识”，一般为get, gain, obtain, acquire+knowledge，而不是learn, study+knowledge.
some， others 是句式……你的不在一个句子里