作文修改:《温暖时刻》

发布网友 发布时间：2022-05-13 19:50

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热心网友 时间：2022-06-08 06:28

It is said that if we think something serious in the daytime, we would dream about it at night. In the light of this statement, if someone has a hoping（有没有其他表示理想的词？）, it might come into the dream and the dream must be very especially.
Once I had a similar experience.I had dreamed to be a computer engineer when I growing up.I had the dream in which I had designed a famous software replacing the Windows made by Microsoft Corporation. This software made computers be like people. I could think and make a judgement on its own. Then I rosed to fame and even the new type of computers were named after me. Not only did I become famous,but also my country, China,increased her positions(提高了地位是不是这样表达？) of Information Technology.
Although it is only a dream, it is still available for I believe all of the dreams will come true if we work hard.

热心网友 时间：2022-06-08 07:46

星星在银河中躺着，是那么的舒服；鱼儿在溪水中游动着，是那么得欢快。而我，生活在妈妈的爱河里，是那么的温暖。 　
　　每天中午我放学回来，妈妈便从厨房走出来用笑容迎接我，然后帮我把书包放在椅子上。便继续去做饭了。夏天的厨房，如蒸笼一般炎热。妈妈厨房中忙碌着，而我，却在凉爽的空调卧室里悠闲地上网冲浪。厨房与卧室相比、我与妈妈相比，简直就是一个地狱，一个天堂。
而妈妈还在厨房，在如烤箱般的厨房中，为我们做着可口晚饭。那些滚烫的油点儿像恶魔一样，使妈妈十分辛苦。她左手握住锅柄，右手仍然拿着锅铲，在锅里来来回回地翻滚着，脸上显得非常吃力。虽然开着电扇，但不起丝毫作用。汗珠从她的脸颊上滚了下来，在空气中划过一道美丽的弧线。这时，我多想拿一个毛巾把妈妈的汗珠擦干净，让她下来坐坐喝杯水。这铁锅仿佛有千斤重，以至于妈妈拿起它时，臂上的肌肉不时颤抖着，手上青筋暴起，看着我都心里酸酸的。每次做完饭后，只要我对她说:"妈妈做的菜真好吃!"妈妈就会在一旁像小学生受表扬似的看着我憨憨地笑笑。 　
　　妈妈整天为我操劳，为整个家庭充满温暖而操劳着。宁肯自己受苦受累，也不愿我吃一点苦，是那么关爱我。妈妈用她的勤劳，智慧和爱心，时刻温暖着我，时刻温暖着这个家，使温暖时时刻刻环绕在我身边。